Reviews for Golden Moon
KarukMomma chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
I really love it so far! I've been reading a few of these alternate fanfictions of New Moon and I am REALLY enjoying yours. You aren't rushing everything so it's hard to believe and I totally LOVE that you slipped my favorite Sci Fi series in there! LOL I can't wait to keep reading...
mystiquepaw chapter 55 . 7/7/2013
I love the story, it really drew me in (stayed up half the night reading it ) I will admit I wish you had continued it just a bit longer, I would have loved to read Bella as a newborn (and maybe that year Jasper promised her :)
Cullen 3 chapter 54 . 7/5/2013
I will never see twilight the same...
Everything in here is believable
I really hate how people make Jasper and Bella stories (#TeamEdward) but this story makes me see that Jasper snd Bella would make nice friends although since I'm to attached to the original story I may be biased...
Thank You for a great story Also I love your vocab. I always want to improve mine so thanks for the big words. Also love how you made Jake feel more like a brother and a friend than a boyfriend in this one, plus you thought logically that if Bella and him weren't "falling in love" in this story that he might be Alpha now, BTW love how you made Emily and the pack accept her so easy... I've always liked Emily

Anyway Thanks for your time and effort into making this

Cullen 3
Epicme123 chapter 44 . 6/27/2013
Twilighter368 chapter 54 . 6/24/2013
Is Mike different because of the CPR from Sam prior to him change?
Red Eyed Newborn chapter 33 . 6/24/2013
I just can't stop thanking you. You are just making the story less cliche and I appreciate the characters' changes. I am really glad you made Jasper crabby and Bella think of kissing Mile. Just reading that's she was thinking about makes the story more realistic.
Red Eyed Newborn chapter 32 . 6/24/2013
First of all THANK YOU for making Jake's relationship with Bella Platonic! I just don't like it when more than 2 guys are romantically interested in a girl. It's like "I get it already! She's perfect!" Secondly, you made Mike actually have a chance with Bella. Most authors would have made me the one dimensional dumb jock that's in the book. I could see Bella giving him a chance if Jasper wasn't there. I also think you made great point in why Jasper's relationship with Alice could be unbalanced and lacking freedom. I always hated how Bella put herself down when she was next to Edward. Good job
Twilighter368 chapter 38 . 6/24/2013
I can't tells his gong to be the catalyst behind the prologue. Edward, Alice, Victoria or Laurent, it could be an of them or someone I'm not thinking of.
Twilighter368 chapter 31 . 6/23/2013
The way you portray mike actually makes me like him and now I want to read a Mike/Bella story but I know it won't be the same.
Twilighter368 chapter 27 . 6/23/2013
I had a Pirates of the Carrabean pinball machine at home growing up. My siblings and I would have everlasting tournaments. It was probably my parents bet investment. It could keep us busy for hours.
Twilighter368 chapter 15 . 6/23/2013
I she gonna let him finish what he had to say?
Twilighter368 chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
I really loved that scene with Jasper. It gave me a much needed laugh.
Twilighter368 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I love that she's not a wimp here. Nice start.
Red Eyed Newborn chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
This story is a really good. I think you made Bella more real. I mean in the book she was kind of one dimensional but here she is going through what everyone thinks of in a break up. Bella still sounds like herself (well the more conscience part of herself) but more sincere. The part where jasper gave Bella the shopping bag was clever.
loventherussian17 chapter 55 . 6/21/2013
love it
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