Reviews for Golden Moon
journey2002 chapter 20 . 3/15/2009
Okay... My definition of "hot" was pretty close to that. It may not have been erotic but it was definitely sensual and extremely hot. I love the speed with which you are moving things along - not too fast but certainly not slow either.

Please update again as soon as you get a chance!
Calliope Jones chapter 20 . 3/15/2009
OH MY GOD. That's all I could say the whole time I was reading.

And the whole smelling thing? Holy cats! That was HOT.

Oh, bravo, bravo!

The slow pace is killing me, but oh, I love it!
anythingzombie chapter 20 . 3/15/2009
Man, this chapter was good.

Jasper is jealous (I feel like teasing him) hahaha.

The hug thing was cute, I could actually feel it. But warmer.

Eek, I can't wait for things to get more intense, they'll will get more intense..right?

I hope so.
HarlieWrites chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
Argh, Great!

I really loved the last bit, with the knives and his hand and what-not.

Can't wait for next next half.
dragonett3 chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
Haha

Jasper has a point!

This is really good!

love and you know it!
Vendell chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
more,more,more, please! I am SO Team Jasper. I really like how you are writing this fic. It's good to see Bella and Jasper getting to know each other.
0Y chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
add more right now! plz? i'll b waiting
tigger5600 chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
awesome .. keep writing and update soon.. I cant wait to see what happens! :)
alice hale chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
The story plot is really good...I read fan fiction from my cell phone and I have ur story on my faves
CullenMysteri chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
I'm really liking the story so far. I like the pace you have for it, but I still can't wait to see what happens between the two. Of course I hope Jasper and Bella end up together. I'm a fan of that pairing, Team Jasper and what not. Can't wait for the next update.
shellebean chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
Can't wait to find out Jasper's reaction to Bella's poetry partner! Chick peas absolutely priceless!
FindingLoveInWonderland chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
i really, really, really, really, liked it

can't wait till the next chapters!
AlCoda chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
I nearly pissed myself laughing at the chick pea's haha

x.x.x
Calliope Jones chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
Oh! I was getting desperate for an update! And oh the anticipation... what's he up to?
Rena the Strange chapter 19 . 3/14/2009
Roar I love the fanfic. I honestly can't think of a way to improve it. _
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