|Reviews for Golden Moon|
| anythingzombie chapter 17 . 3/10/2009
Aww I see you had a case of 'Action Fingers' they save everyone.
Man I was practically hollaring 'Kiss her! Kiss her!' hahaha.
Man, this was a really good chapter, Jasper makes me all wiggly inside.
And that last paragraph, omg it just made me all sorts of happy for Bella, and me. :) So so so so good.
| shellebean chapter 17 . 3/10/2009
I like Bella standing up for herself but Jasper may have been overdone just a bit. I feel like he would be upset but maybe a little more mature in his reaction. It will be interesting to see how Bella explains her Mike conversation. I wonder if she will pick up on Jasper's jealousy at all. Can't wait to find out!
| alice chapter 17 . 3/10/2009
Omagosh you rule keep writing umm jasper should kiss bella
| kirallie chapter 17 . 3/10/2009
Liked her standing up to Jasper for messing with her emotions. Good work!
| tigger5600 chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
very well written... bella's finally is speaking up for herself! Yay! LOL.. anywho.. keep writing and update when you can! :)
| Aris-5221 chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
I like the fact that Bella is standing up for herself, but I do think that Jasper's reaction was a little over the top, but other wise it's a really good story. Continue soon!
| PerphektMe chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
I'm relly enjoing this, it almost feels a little bit forbidden when I'm reading it. Perfect.
I was a little put off by the darlin's but when I tried to insert any other word there it just didn't feel complete anymore.
Anyways I added it to my favs and alerts!
| SuP3R G1R chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
loved the last line ... I dont know why but this is my favorite chapter.. you managed the reactions perfectly , and it's a good honest conversation between friends ... well maybe more than friends hahah
| herestolife222 chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
I love this new Bella! I like how she demands to be treated as an equal. It's her strength that makes her so attractive to everyone. I think that's one of the first things Edward fell in love with, so I would assume it's one of the things that makes Jasper so close to her. I was a little bothered by Jasper's reaction. It just seemed a little childish and unnecessary. I'm definitely looking forward to Part 2 of the Backbone Bella.
| Team 108.9 chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
Excellent! Although it may not have been a cliffhanger you certainly left the chapter so as it's as bad as a cliffy :) I need to know whats next! Bella actually standing up for herself is great, its nice to see her with a backbone. I'm excited to see her reaction to Jaspers comment.
| Calliope Jones chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
Waugh. Did you HAVE to stop there? Once again, well done! Jealous Jasper is oh so delicious!
| Thirdnlst chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
I just found this story and I absolutely love it..I am all for Jasper and Bella together, I think they are perfect and you are doing a great job.
I will keep reading, please keep writing!
| IdreamofEddy chapter 12 . 3/9/2009
OH MY GOD Hands Free! Bella's thinking dirty, I love it.
| AlCoda chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
Yay She stood up for herself lol.
The two of them are a nightmare haha they blame themselves for everything haha
| Taru Galateia chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
Because, I love how he calls her "Darlin'". Okay, it may not be a good enough reason to update, but it is for me. Ha. Anyways, I love how you're not rushing their relationship. I may not have read Twilight or any of the other books, but for some reason I'm drawn to the fan fictions. Particularly Jasper/Bella or Bella/Jasper ones. I don't know what it is. Perhaps it's my belief that Jasper and Bella make a better couple than Edward and Bella. I actually have Twilight wiht me right now, but can't bring myself to read it. Mostly because of the Edward/Bella pairing. Not that I want to break up Jasper and Alice. The canon pairings are great, though I haven't read any of the books. Anyways, something to improve upon: spelling and missing words. At least, I believe there are missing words. If I'm mistaken, I sincerely apologize. Anyways, great story.