|Reviews for Golden Moon|
| Calliope Jones chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
I love how she turns into a squee fangirl when he says Darlin'. Like the rest of us.
| eclipsedbrunette chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
Girl, you are going to be the death of me with this story.
I loved this chapter, hell I love any chapter with Jasper period.
Do the others come back at some point?
| RedFloridaGurl chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
i like how it shows more of how much she likes him
aww he's attached!
| herestolife222 chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
Bella is so CUTE! She is cracking me up because she is acting the exact way I feel that I would. I'm so embarrassed to see "my" actions written and read. LOL, I feel for her. Jasper must be... well something. I wonder what he's thinking. Will he ever tell her? I like the pacing, but I'm so impatient. I know I'll appreciate the story more in its current pacing, but still, I can't stop myself from feeling like, "What's next?" Looking forward to the next chapter.
| MizzKat chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
Aww that was acute chapter.. I'm wanting more. I want to know what will happen
| anythingzombie chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
I loved it, I think I have a crush on Jasper now, well I had one before but now it's bigger.
Update right now, i'm not kidding. I love love love this story.
| Mmsimpy09 chapter 12 . 3/2/2009
Of course I love it! I love him and the darlin thing. It makes me smile. It's cute and it's slightly personal between them!
| Liv chapter 11 . 3/2/2009
Ahh...this is lovely. You write incredibly well and this is one of the only JxB stories that I really FEEL. I'm glad you're taking it slow, that's how they should be. More of the lovely, non-Edward type Jasper and you're a winner! xo.
| cherry-ribbon chapter 11 . 3/2/2009
I am so glad I found your story!
I think you write all the characters really well, especially Jasper.
Plus, its nice to read a story where Jasper and Bella don't immediately say 'I love you' like, 3 chapters in. There's a clear growth in their relationship, not just an immediate jump from barely friends to lovers.
Bella is definitely obtuse. When it comes to Jasper, anyway.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
| ashleyworman chapter 11 . 3/2/2009
I really like this story. Keep up the good work.
| MizzKat chapter 11 . 3/1/2009
I'm late in reading the story but I love it! You don't rsuh anything and I love that the most. Plus I think you have the jasper character perfeclt and its not like they are admitting their undying love to eachother already. Its great and I'll for deff keep readin if u do make a jasper point of few I would love to read it
| eclipsedbrunette chapter 11 . 3/1/2009
Omg this was perfect! I love your writing style, and I can't wait to see what happens.
I would love a little insight on Jasper's mind if you would.
| firstsong1 chapter 11 . 3/1/2009
I am really enjoying your story! And man, it doesn't matter what story it's in, hearing Jasper refer to Bella as 'Darlin' makes MY stomach do flips. M. ;-) And it's even better when it's in a great story like yours. Love it and can't wait to see their relationship blossom!
| m.j chapter 11 . 3/1/2009
i realy like your story it doesnt really jump the gun and its good having jacob thrown in there
| HarlieWrites chapter 11 . 3/1/2009
It's Harlie from previous reviews, I made an account :P
I love this chapter, how Bella told Jasper so much about Edward.
I was hoping after she said "we could talk untill I fell asleep" that he was going to come in but I guess that is pushing the limits.