|Reviews for Golden Moon|
| AlCoda chapter 8 . 2/27/2009
I hate the fact that she wont just turn around and tell Mike to Fuck off lol I sure as hell would XD
| Harlie chapter 8 . 2/27/2009
I really love where this story is heading.
I love how Bella is stronger,
I love how you think Bella was pathetic in the real books- (because come on, she was :P)
I love how you didn't go straight into JasperxBella "loving eachother" straight away
And I love how you made Bella seem interested in Jake first, not Jasper.
All in all, this it really good, sure, it's progressing slowly but if it went fast it would seem unrealistic, I look forward to your next installment. :)
| Mmsimpy09 chapter 8 . 2/26/2009
Again, awesome! I think you nailed Jasper and Bella again. Yeah I think Bella needed that reaction from Jasper. It's him definately like him to feel that way!
| jasperismydarlin chapter 7 . 2/26/2009
OMG. Jasper can tell me he's glad I'm staying anytime. I loved that line!
Looking forward to more!
| anythingzombie chapter 7 . 2/26/2009
Yes I did enjoy it, I think it's good for Bella to get out and realize she dosn't like any of those boys (although she knows it) and sees that Jasper is the one for her, btw are you going to throw any more Jacob in there?
| shellebean chapter 7 . 2/26/2009
Great chapter! I'm sure Jasper will have some great advice and I can't wait to hear what he has to say!
| AlCoda chapter 7 . 2/26/2009
I really do feel for Bella mike thinks he has a date with her XD
| Tuggy08 chapter 7 . 2/26/2009
| SuP3R G1R chapter 7 . 2/25/2009
I love this story and also the fact that you take your time with the characters ... I want to know what happens next!...
“Bella,” Jasper said, “I’m glad you decided to stay.” LOVE IT!
| Mmsimpy09 chapter 7 . 2/25/2009
Normally, I don't feel the need to comment every new chapter to stories. However, yours has definately earned the place as my favorite twilight fanfic yet! I like the relationship and character building that you have! For some reason, I want Bella to invite Jasper along on the movie. That would make for a very interesting and entertaining chapter. I can picture it now, Mike swooning over Bella and Jasper being slightly jealous! Ok, I'm rambling and for this I'm sorry! I hope you add more soon! It's terrific!
| anythingzombie chapter 6 . 2/25/2009
I liked this chapter a whole lot, it made me smile.
My first smile of the day, I just woke up about twenty minutes ago. I think it came out good and I cannot wait for the next, then the next and so on so forth. I'm adding this to my fav stories.
| shellebean chapter 6 . 2/25/2009
Yeah, Jasper! I like Japser or can you tell? I think the chapter was good! I think you showed his struggle without making him too dark. I also liked the fact that you pointed out how his family always handled him in the past. You're right he needs to learn self control gradually, it wouldn't just suddenly be there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| AlCoda chapter 6 . 2/25/2009
Aw I really like this chapter tis good.
| Mmsimpy09 chapter 6 . 2/24/2009
Once again, I love this chapter. I have a thing for darker turns. I think it was definately good. I love Jasper. I think you have him pegged perfectly. Honestly, I hope him and Bella get to be closer then friends. I think your really talented at the way you describe things! I can't wait for another chapter. If you need any test readers, I'd be happy to help you. I'm a good critic lol.
| shellebean chapter 5 . 2/24/2009
I agree that Jake needs to be part of the story, it just wouldn't be the same without him. I am ready for Bella to stop crying herself to sleep but at least she is dealing much better than the original Bella! Can't wait for Jasper again!