Reviews for Open Your Mouth and Say AH |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. He is right...just the right fit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has been so long since I read this originally it is like a brand new story. thoughougly enjoying this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been away for quite sometime living life. Sorry I missed this for so many years. Glad to see you fleshing Wilson out. Loved the first chapter. That is exactly the way I see the man. Looking forward to reading the rest. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED this story! Thanks for the excellent read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, a great fic. I think you got all the canon characters to be in character, and you've fleshed out Wilson nicely as well. If this was an episode, I would want to see more of Wilson! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe. Awesome story! Poor Wilson, always his rank is being taken from him... :) Thanks for writing and posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just stumbled across this story and was very impressed! I read it over quickly and will give it a more careful read soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, is this really your first attempt at writing a story? Cause if it is, dang your good! Everyone was in character, you had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes, and it was all tied together in a fun plot. Absolutely great. If you don't believe me when I say that, your story got recommended to me as something to learn from. Thats right, someone out there loves you enough to recommend your writing to a new writer (me) to learn a thing or two from. And I have! On my very first story I went crazy on the POVs, yours flowed together greatly without all those page breaks and bold lettering and stuff. Also you showed me many different ways to have fun with the characters while keeping them in character to the series. Thank you for taking the time to even write this story, I had a great time reading it. I hope to see more from you and keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hogan is not a guy to cross lightly, but nor is Wilson- Kinch could be right about the laxitives. Hogan got off lightly. The lesson I'm taking away fgrom this is 'Don't piss off medics'. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Wilson. He is a very determined sort of guy, and sometimes Hogan needs to have a proper clash with the loyal opposition. He doesn't get a whole lot of loyal opposition at all in the show, I don't think, so it's great to see this! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Wilson! :D He's right though, "London told me I could" is a sub-ideal answer... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe... Hogan is in for it! First round, nil all... second round? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, Wilson. You're in for it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Do not bother trying to escape no one has ever escaped from Stalag 13 and it would only create more paper work for me." Hehe...:) Nice intro to both Klink and Hogan for Wilson. I like how the 'casual officer' vibe is abundantly apparent for Wilson. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short chapter! This is the problem w reviewing by chapter, I find out now you have got a beta reader. And of course this was all written months ago. wow, about a year ago! :) Anyway, it continues interesting! |