|Reviews for Pandora|
| Selective scifi junkie chapter 2 . 11/30/2010
I've found your first victorian english dialect error. I usually find loads. It's impressive that I read four of your fics before spotting a single language error. I'm a grammer Nazi.
Though I appear to have bruised my ego The word ego hadn't been invented yet. Aside the indignity of it or Though I have wounded my pride would be more in keeping with the times.
| DZR chapter 10 . 1/2/2010
I have just discovered this story and I'm so glad I did. It's awesome! Thoroughly believable in a Sanctuary context. I could picture it all happening with the shows characters. Well done.
| withoutreason chapter 10 . 11/11/2009
this is absolutely lovely...
| Charlie.aus chapter 10 . 6/7/2009
this was a wonderfully ritten story. You played on emotions and circumstances very well
| Solarista chapter 10 . 4/22/2009
Wow i loved this story it was amazing you should continue it you add bits .
| wigglesfunk chapter 10 . 3/11/2009
This was absolutely brilliant. Every bit of it!
| wigglesfunk chapter 7 . 3/4/2009
Wow, these last two chapters were amazing. I love how you wrote John and how he transitioned into Jack. And Helen's reaction to it, it's perfect. Can't wait to read more!
| theshipperlogs chapter 3 . 2/26/2009
Wow! Two more great chapters...you have a good use of the language and I like the way you write John.
| wigglesfunk chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Oh! What a well written story. I loved how you wrote Helen's father, Gregory. I can just see it now. Do you plan on writing a sequel?
| theshipperlogs chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
This is off to a great start...I'm very interested to see how John descends into his dark side and how that affects Helen.