Reviews for Rivalry
Anon chapter 1 . 1/20
A funny glimpse. I like this Lothiriel who knows her own worth.
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Brilliant! :-)
Shostakovich chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Ahaha. This is great, totally great. I love that she's sassy, and her brothers are great too. Wonderful writing!
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
A great story. Very well written.
awaylaughingonafastcamel chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
hehe, I enjoyed this! I'm glad that it didn't turn out to be Eomer, nice to have a little twist!
annna chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
I absolutely love this story - it draws a wonderful picture of the royal family of Dol Amroth!

And in asking Legolas to be her dance partner Lothiriel shows that she knows exactly who will be the best dancer and manages to secure him as partner for the evening - showing her to be a clever diplomat able to reach her goals... ;-
elsie chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
i've read this story twice now (what can i say; the lothiriel/eomer ship just doesn't have enough fics), and my giggling still prompted my sister to lean over the laptop and see what it was about. Great story, really well done banter in it :D
Saltwater chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Ahaha! That was supremely cute! Loved it.
starless nite chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
the story was so banter between amro and lothi and the introduction of legolas amazing .Liked it very much.
Lady Bluejay chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
The finished article is very, very good. Well done. LBJ
Lialathuveril chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
I was giggling the whole time I read this. It's even better when you know what's coming. Love the squabbling between Imrahil's children and how you set up your readers' expectations.

Lia
miriamne chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
very enjoyable! I was surprised who Lothy found as her partner!
Deandra chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
And I'm sure you knew full well your readers would be expecting Eomer to be her partner! Legolas is Lord "Twinkletoes"... *snicker* Bad Deandra - stop giggling!

- Deandra

parameter - should be "perimeter"

“You were supposed escort her - left out a "to" before escort
Willow-41z chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Hee! I like this version even better than the one I read before. The banter between the siblings, and the characterization, is really good. And I like how Imrahil, at the end, is not fooled by Amrothos's evasions.

A nice piece!