Reviews for Sweeney's new future
My Thyla My Captain chapter 2 . 7/16/2010
aw... ;(

poor toby.

plz do update soon.

nellie lovett gracey chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
aww i feel bad for toby isn't there anymore i hope she becomes happy soon and please update
Martin Baker chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Do you put graphics where their names are supposed to go? I wondered because I can't hear the names. Anyway, I absolutely adore this! I have a movie kinda like this where a boy keeps a journal throughout his childhood and when he's a man, he reads himself back in time to fix his past. Only problem is, he screws it all up. He has to make it so his girlfriend and he never met in order to fix his best friend Tommy's life. Good luck.
Joker with the Green Scarf chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
I love it :') I cried at the part where he saw Lucy and Johanna. Poor Mrs Lovett. She can't see Toby anymore D:
TheDreamChaser chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
poor Nellie she cant see Toby

well this is going rather good

update soon
Emelyns chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Sounds interesting.

I'd love for you to continue it.