Reviews for And Now, You're Mine
ReadingWritingAllDayLong chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This was amazing! I felt so sorry for Basta, and you wrote this so well!
Gyp Dark chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Loved this, spectacularly done, and a real possibility. Poor Basta... he really needs a hug! Thanks for writing this, it was stunning. Blessed be! )
XxXVampires-are-awesomeXxX chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Aww poor Basta :(
CaptainMajor chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
wow at first i didn't like it much, it was almost like i was being talked down to, but once your writing started warming up, you did a really good job!

"He tried to keep his eyes on the floor, but curiosity got the better of him and when his gaze met Capricorn's, the hunger that greeted him in those colourless eyes made the blood in his veins run cold." EXCELLENT! :D 5 stars! So well worded!

Btw, this was so completely unexpected. I recently wrote a scene where Basta got raped, and i was like: omg im so original! Then i read yours. ha. I will admit you did a better job than me! (Chapter 4 of the "The Idiot box", in case you were wondering).

Anyways, nice stuff. Keep up the good work. :)

Captain Isabeau LaJoie

Love our Soldiers

PS: If you ever have the time, please feel free to read and review some of my stories ;)
M1nk chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
i felt bad for basta.

but it was really good!

:D

well im subscribing cause your stories were awesome and i just have to read more of them

xD
sarahlizzie chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
I love!

Poor Basta!

I actually really like this story, and it is pretty much perfect, apart from the odd grammar mistake/typo when you have not put a comma after the end of a quote, for example:

"Wake up now" he coaxed...

Needs a comma after the 'now'

Ha, but I'm totally nitpicking, coz this was awesome!
VampwithAttitude chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Poor Basta! I've always thought he was just the kind of character who didn't know which side he was on and only wanted to please, but then again your idea could just be it. Poor thing.
Radioactive Rubber Duck chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
;_; Poor Basta...I don't really like him that much, but still...

This was really good though, I liked it . Even if it was sad...

Only,why is Basta italian in this? I mean, if he was born in the Inkworld then he'd be from there, right?

But otherwise I didn't have a problem with it, it's really well written.
Nightstars-girl chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
O.o oh my lord...

Poor Basta!

AH! *twitches*

god that was terrible, written well but oh god poor Basta!

:(