Reviews for Bruise
SleepingSeeker chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
His regret over saying those words was perfect and brutal and real. Nicely done.
lost-katana chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Hey there! Sorry I took so long to review this- been busy, alas.

But seriously- I should be thanking YOU for letting me be among the first to read it. 'Twas an honor- your fics are excellent. And I'm a sucker for Leo, a sucker for mind!fuck, and so the two combine just equals love. *grin*

Also, got your PM and am somehow unable to respond to it at the moment, so I'm doing so here. You're welcome for the title idea. I'm just glad you liked it. :D
innocent-rebel chapter 1 . 2/20/2009 I can't even describe how amazing and beautiful this was! I absolutely loved it! The flow was perfect and the way you rhymed what was written in the sky...oh man! This was beautiful! I don't think I've been this touched by a TMNT fanfiction in awhile! this is pure awesomeness!
Nekotsuki chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
As you know, I've already read this. :D I'm in awe of anyone who can write such nifty drug-hazed scenes (I totally fail at them) and you did an excellent job. Your new finish works much better. _
Raphshell chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Wow this is really awesome. You did an amazing job at capturing Leo's guilt and all his emotions. Jeez its so sad to!

The only thing I'm wondering is if this is a dream sequence he is going through or if it is the effect of the drugs. I'm guessing its probably a combination of both.
doggirl2772 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
OMG, that was brilliant! Just stunningly amasing! Oh wow, this seriously makes me bow to you! *bows down till nose touches pavement*

That was just... ooh, I'm really speachless to it. Oh wow, that is so beautiful! Just gorgeous writing and idea... Bravo!

My favourite parts would have to be the rhymes and when Raph says, 'Proud of me, big brother?' Oh wow, talk about goosebumps!

Thank you for writing this!
Simone Robinson chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
whoa...that was so creepy and so gosh. Brilliant, awesome and I loved it. Keep it up.
gypsywriter135 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
I liked, but it was a little confusing...

Maybe that's just me...

Anyways, I really did like all the same! I like the description and the emotion behind it. :)