Reviews for Dimension of Erised Wishes
PrewalShadeX chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
cool! Please update soon!
lil bunny chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
ooohhh i likey really much. Are u gonna make Harry face off Voldermort and kill him off that will be nice. and you should make harry and ginny date quick kinda creepy about sirurs hitting on ginny like u said can be his daughter. but please hurry to up date i like it
Rising From The Flames chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Wow, this is really well written, and I like your take on them time traveling. Although Ginny does have some anger issued that she didn't have in the books. Are you going to be finishing this?
enslaving-melodies chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Actually by not shaking Draco's hand Harry inadvertently insulted the House of Malfoy something he would have known not to do if he had been raised properly. He might have saved Draco from the Death Eater's. He can still save Lucius and maybe Peter and Regulus and Severus. Remember James and Sirius bullied Severus because he was poor, dressed funny and was Lily's friend. Get them to befriend him.
Malchior chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
You do realize that Voldemort killed his father while still in school right? Read the sixth book again, it's clearly mentioned in during the lessons with Dumbledore. Also, Riddle came and applied for the job before he came out as Lord Voldemort, he applied twice, once after graduating, and again some time later. Remember, Riddle is about 60 years old in book 7, so I think your time line is pretty inaccurate.
Malchior chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Not to mention, you throw in the fact that Hedwig is a magical owl, and you she can live as long as you desire her to.
Mini Luna chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
Loved it!
Blah chapter 3 . 5/15/2009
Sorry, but just taking all kinds of scenes from the books and then try to replay them with Sirius/James/Remus again doesn't cut it. You change ages without care for the context for example you place Molly/Arthur 1971 at Hogswarts. You ignore the fact that Ron was born 1980, Charly is *at least* 7 years older, while Bill is at least 1 year older again. That presses the timeline for them really hard to stay believable. Furthermore you make Bella a 3rd year, how can Bella become Riddle's 2nd hand in the available timeframe for her after school ?

Furthermore Riddle asked for the job at Hogwarts far before 1971.
nightwing27 chapter 3 . 3/26/2009
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
good start too bad harry can't save his parents
babedarlingpotter chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
i luv this cap, please update soon!

Blouta chapter 3 . 3/19/2009
yay! another chapter! and a really really good one too!
Captain Kork chapter 3 . 3/18/2009
are the marauders and lily gonna find out about the time traveling and stuff?
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