|Reviews for Deception|
| thinofsubstance chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I always thought there must be something behind Alex's need to face Alanna; this is as interesting a theory as any! And very well executed, to boot.
Thanks for this. :)
| skepsis66 chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
*goggles* oh. my. god. this is absolutely brilliant! brilliant, i tell you! alan(na) & alex - i am so going to be addicted to the pairing now. it's so tragic though... once again *winks*. tragic, but brilliant.
| anonnnimous chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
lovely, beautiful. you seriously deserve more reviews. wow. i never really favored slash...but hey. you actually made me like it...
| honeymango chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
wow. after reading a million lifeless stories, yours stands out as being well written and eloquent. im so tired of stories with nothing but lame dialogue, so thank you for writing something with depth.
| one chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
this is really good. you are one of the few authors who was a ble to understand Pierce's characters accept them and then recreate them. Alex was perfect and your story gave a realitstic and probable portrayal of his feelings.
| Halaia chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
I like this story, very short though.
| shadowcat15 chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I knew that when I typed in 'Alex alanna' in the search engine, that I would get a few dark stories...and I was right! Good, dark, and if Tamora added the scenes that you have and she doesn't, then I could believe that this really happened.
| SirLady Lupin chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
| Gray Rain chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
very, very good. Your writing style is clear and easy to follow, and you paint a detailed picture with your words.
| Feirdra chapter 1 . 4/6/2003
WOW. This makes so much sense in the book that it’s actually kinda scary. Once again, I’m amazed at how well it could have fit. Lords. I don’t mind the yaoi. *shrug* One gets used to that when one’s fave characters are male. I’m a girl. *shrug* Anyway, I really liked this, the way the fights were described, Alex’s emotions, the reasoning, everything was so skillfully written it all made sense in a twisted sort of way. I like the way you portray the guy. Dark but emotional at the same time. O_o I also like your style, the descriptions were very nice indeed. Keep writing, you’re good.
| penny de karinth chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
that was so cool! I found you're fanfiction link on the rogue and had to check it out!
| not so faerie L chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
this is really great! its an interesting idea, and u wrote it really well, is there a sequel? ill go look, cos it would b great to read,
| Romulus chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
Woah. Interesting explanation for Alex's..er...evilness. I'm not usually into slash, but this one wasn't nasty, it was good! I'm gonna add this to my favorites!
| lastpaperbender chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
Hey...I found your fic at , and it's gratifying to see that I'm not the only one in fanfic land who's been wondering about Alex ;) Ms. Pierce was a little sketchy about why Alex hated Alan/Alanna so much, and your interpretation is very thought-provoking and well-written. Btw, I've been working on a fanfic about involving a character who is Alex's illegitimate son, which you might find interesting food for thought. Anyway, great story!
| Bec Katie the chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
oh, oh. That was awesome. All twisty and beautifully-written and it fit seamlessly in to canon - because we know so little about Alex's motivations and thoughts. Thank you.