Reviews for Triangle
quilhan chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
enchantedsleeper chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Awwww. Poor Norrington :( I do feel sincerely sorry for him a lot of the time (Willabeth shipper that I am), because I was sincere in his affection for Elizabeth, it's just that he wasn't right for her at all. Great writing!
RedLikeStarlight chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Wow... So sad. This piece was extremely well-written. I love your writing style.

"The way her eyes lit up when she momentarily glanced at the door, a cheshire grin replacing her polite smile."

I love this line- "A cheshire grin." Perfect. :)

For me, the saddest part of this is not the fact that James didn't get to dance with Elizabeth, it's the fact that he felt so accomplished in holding her attention and then realizing the smile on her face wasn't a real one- that the real one was reserved for her blacksmith.

Very well done, anyway. Keep writing!

Sachita chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Poor James...I feel sorry for him. Well-written story!
themelancholysiren chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Aw, poor Norrie!
Amanda Howlett chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Good oneshot! I love James, and you portrayed him perfectly. It was very nice! They should've had this scene in the movie. Good job!