|Reviews for Persistent Resistance|
| Clyden chapter 5 . 6/6/2021
This was cute haha
| Zafyra's chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
Ahh, as always, such a good story.
I had kept your last on the side to make the pleasure of reading you last longer. And it was a good idea, because I really needed a good fanfiction today, and I knew I'll find it with you.
What I like most is still your writing. So smooth, enjoyable and precise. Never to much nor not enough. Your scenes descrption and dialogues and like an aim for me. I wish someday I could do as well.
Of course, it's not only that. The way you handle characters and their evolutions, their relationships... it's really, really nice. I re-read In Dreams recently, and I can even say you got even better in that domoin. Or maybe it is the environment.
The realism you care to create in the sex scene, or even in every character's feeling is admirable. Actually I respect you very much for that.
For such a detailled beggining leading to such a hot feeling, I have to say I was a bit disappointed there was nothing after. Just some chapers to show their developpement or even everyday life. For me sex isn't an achievement of all, so I feel it kinda lacks something.
It's been 8 years already since this fanfic, your last. I would love to read again your stories, so if you ever get the envy, nedd, to write again, it would be my pleasure to read you.
Thank you for this great moment!
| 000error000 chapter 5 . 4/19/2017
I loved the amount of details in each chapter, but I personally felt that the last chapter was a bit lacking. I'd hoped to see what happened with Lucci and Ace, their opinions about things. It kind of seemed unfinished to me. I think you could've expanded more on Sanji and Zoro's relationship in the end, as well. But overall it was a great story, I enjoyed reading it!
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/26/2016
Make a sequel and expand a little on there relationship besides ending a little sooner than I personally would of liked it was good!
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
2 problems with the story: chopper and usopp.
Otherwise awesome. Keep it up :-)
| Pirats Gold chapter 3 . 11/9/2015
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2015
SOOOOOOOOO GOOD! Your writing style is fabulous and so perfectly descriptive!
| DaBears1 chapter 5 . 3/12/2015
I liked this. It was very easy to get into the story and fun for a quick read keep up the good work cant wait to read other ones of yours.
| S. Bug Slays chapter 5 . 9/3/2014
This fic is perfection! It literally has everything I've ever wanted to read from a fanfic! Thank you a 100 times over for this xoxoxoxo
| Phantasium chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
This is such a great story, loved it! The characters are done so well and I love the idea of all of them being a close set of friends, thanks!
| otakupsycopath16 chapter 5 . 8/20/2014
This was one hell of a story , simply amazing :)
God ! Its the best zosan fanfic I read so far in anywhere !
( and I might have learned some innocent damaging details but hehehe it was worth the sacrifice :-P)
| Lorphen chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
yay for sanji for embracing his sexuality. :}
did someone beta this?
| Imperial Mint chapter 5 . 6/2/2014
This is such a wonderful story, thank you so much for writing!
| Furyina chapter 5 . 5/15/2014
That was a damn good fiction. I love the way you write, your story was simple yet very interesting and the sex at the end ... *blushes*. Well, you know how to write this part hahaha !
I loved the way you used a lot of characters from One Piece ! Lucci was great and I liked his relationship with Robin ! Very good idea !
And I know it wasn't here to be funny bug I nearly lost it when Sanji started speaking French while sucking Zoro. I was in the subway and when he started reciting the menu, I was 100% done. Oh god, sometimes it's good to be French, foreigners are doing crazy things with our language but that's great !
Thank you for this nice moment and the good laugh !
| Prime's Little One chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
"I think I'm gonna get that tattooed on me somewhere." ROFL! Though, I guess I'd have to agree, especially if I was in Zoro's position... (damn, that makes me kinda wish I was... And that I was a guy. (/) ) Anywho. I love this. And the ending line. That is... freaking awesome.