|Reviews for A Step In The Good Direction|
| Alani chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
The paragraphs are all bunched together and hard to read.
| chill13 chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I'm glad you picked this fandom! Perfect Strangers is a great show and could always use more fanfics (there sure isn't enough)
I'm impressed with the way you so quickly and accurately explained their history and relationship. I'm not good at that, I'll end up going into far too much detail when all I need is a summery.
Your description and characterizations of our favorite cousins are perfect. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to the restaurant.
One little suggestion: I think the last bit could be divided into more than one paragraph. It might make it a little easier to read. Just a thought :)