Reviews for Legend of the Blond Aburame
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2021
What? Hinata didn't ACTIVATE it? ROFL No.. It's not like the "pink eye" of the uchiha.. It's pretty much active all time, which you can KINDA TELL... It's TRULY active component is just sending chakra, there really isn't an "activating thing" that needs to happen.. Look it up.. You'll see. There is no "trigger event" it's just ALWAYS there. (it's much more stable... Probably since it's not in the hands of a clan that's more psycho then the Bates motel!)

Also what's up with Hiashi? I mean you talk about OOC.. He can't "beat his daughter" that bad.. If he puts her in the hospital that is NOTICED, if it's NOTICED people talk, people talk THE HYUUGA LOSE FACE.. And they can't afford to lose face (they already aren't looked at well with the cage bird.. And Hiashi DOES want to get rid of that*regardless of what some ff say*) they CANNOT keep up the facade of "nobility" AND draw attention to NOT-SO noble actions. It don't work that way.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2021
You know, if the hokage is ALWAYS TOO BUSY to help naruto in these stories.. Or "always too busy" to seize back the village... Or "always too busy" to handle danzo or call back tsunade... THEN WHY IS IT EVERY STORY where he's seen, he's just SITTING THERE READING PORN!? He does ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! He's NOT "the professor", or "god of the shinobi", he's a FRAUD, a complete and UTTER MORON! A BAKA kage, A SENILE OLD MAN that SHOULD have either retired or BEEN retired! Kakashi, Yammato, Asuma, HECK even GAI would be a better choice! Maybe he should get his hand of his withered, old rotted stick and put it on the steering wheel of the village! DO HIS DAMN JOB!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2021
The hinata thing makes me smack my head... It's one of the things that HAVE GOT to be altered about her.. I like hinata.. I truly do...I think she should ALWAYS be with naruto (regardless if he gets others too, or just the one), because she was basically CREATED just to be with him, but her personality DEFINITELY needs "altered" a bit. RIGHT NOW, it's ok.. Because she's pretty sheltered and she's relatively young (no shinobi is ACTUALLY young.. they just DON'T GET THAT.. It's the price for power), BUT before puberty(so age 9-10) that personality quirk should be LONG GONE. But seriously.. You wanna see ANYONE that doesn't like hinata... THIS personalty quirk is the reason... It's ILLOGICAL.. CHILDISH, NON-NONSENSICAL, UTTERLY at odds with her chosen profession/lifestyle and honestly? NOT funny anyway. (it's really NEVER been all that funny, just once in a while, NOT EVERY FLIPPING time she sees him!).
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2021
So in this one, like in canon, I take it that nobody has put together that the kid basically has an ENDLESS supply of yang (the basic force behind LIFE, MOVEMENT and ACTION) flowing through him, from the fox NEARLY CONSTANTLY... The REASON naruto acts like a CRACK-ADDICTED squirrel on a SUGAR HIGH is because he's basically BURSTING AT THE SEAMS with energy that encompasses kinetic energy and LIFE... Add that energy in NEARLY UNLIMITED, INHUMAN amounts, with the uzumaki EXPANDED life-force AND the fact he's a kid.. And well, I'm surprised he hasn't SELF-DETONATED. To help expunge the kid, I'd just take a rather large room and have naruto RUN LAPS in a circle round and round the room, as FAST as he can... OVER and OVER, several times a day, EVERY DAY, until he started blowing off some of that energy. OR teach him some jutsu to funnel all that UNNEEDED energy into OVER AND OVER. (levitation would be good, because he could burn it off constantly and it wouldn't really get him in trouble -well at least not for a few years)
Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 3/26/2021
Actually, I dunno if I've ever read a naruto story, where the villagers DIDN'T KNOW about the fox..You know, one where the third had half-a-functioning brain and kept that information UTTERLY secret... It would be a VASTLY different story that's for sure. The kid LOOKS exactly like minato and without the fox to somehow "blind" them, the similarities would be immediately obvious. (then there is that whole "uzumaki name and clan symbol on all his clothes") Anyway, sorry for the tangent... THIS CHAPTER..

The nurse's blood began to boil? That's just stupid.. Human APATHY is FAR FAR stronger then percieved anger.. And this is SEVEN years later... I say perceieved anger because if you LOOK at the kyuubi attack?... NO CIVILIANS got hit... The fox never even made it INTO konoha.. Also there would have been NO hyuuga, short-range fighters or med nins out there... The fox was just chakra so all those things would have been UTTERLY useless.. So none of THEM were hurt EITHER... All in all, APATHY would have set in, and the attack WOULD have begun fading from memory (especially since the ONLY enemy would have been a GIGANTIC red/orange fox with bunny ears and naruto looks ABSOLUTELY NOTHING like what would be expected *in fact he's a clone of minato*).. All these forces work AGAINST that whole "everybody hates naruto" garbage... Human apathy is the ONLY reason that the ninja villages EXIST.. Think about it, if ALL the nins ALWAYS held a grudge at every thought-of slight and sought revenge for anything? THEY would have torn themselves to PIECES long ago. It just DOESN'T WORK. (same reason naruto REALLY shouldn't worry about what the heirs will think about his status... NOBODY hates their GRANDPARENTS enemies for events THEY WERE NEVER A PART OF! AND DON'T REMEMBER!...That's just stupid)... THAT and the heirs are all from clans that were friends of minato (except the uchiha).. AND THEY ALL KNOW WHO NARUTO IS.. It is LITERALLY IMPOSSIBLE TO MISS!
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 3/25/2021
This could be good.. BUT as we KNOW from canon now, the fox CAN block/kill external forces from working on naruto (the toads couldn't bond to him for sage mode)... Meaning these insects would probably be dusted in seconds... BUT nobody knew that at the time, and plenty of people have fallen to the same fallacy when it comes to orochimaru's curse mark(that should kinda be "expelled" too) and some of those are good. and I do have to admit, I don't think I've seen this one done before.
Sable Dawn chapter 2 . 1/28/2021
The heck is Tuechi, dude picking up an Akamichi is hardcore.
Zeke chapter 44 . 12/24/2020
wish there was more. good story.
Zeke chapter 37 . 12/23/2020
Sasuke and Tenten? Now that is a match I never thought of. Good chapter.
Zeke chapter 29 . 12/23/2020
cool chapter
Zeke chapter 1 . 12/22/2020
didn't think the fox would share with the bugs.
Guest chapter 44 . 10/2/2020
You should update this book. It’s super good even thought it almost been 10 years
That Random HP Roleplayer chapter 44 . 7/29/2020
I know this will probably never get another update but it's too awesome to not believe and hope that I'm wrong. So it'll will go on my Favs and Followed and I really really really hope to see it in my inbox one day
Seint seiya chapter 2 . 7/2/2020
One of the best fanfics i've read so far
JManM chapter 9 . 11/2/2019
I wish their was more uniqueness to his power set by now. He has been hyped up as a super badass completing jonin level training, but do far thier has been no indication that exposure to bijuu chakra has fone anything to the bugs that live inside him. When they finally get used in combat I hope there is something more interesting about them.
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