Reviews for A Pokemon Lovestory
19robo chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
this story, to me, is just a miserable ripoff of light into darkness without any character development or logic but instead with a few plot holes. I mean, Paul already knew that dawn didn't love Lucas, so why'd he still join team galactic? not the worst I've read, but still pretty bad.
Sam chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
So funny !
PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 2 . 8/18/2014
Paul paid big time for joining team Galactic. That's what happens when you join a mafia like group like team Galactic. DEATH! At least in the end, he learned his mistakes. The moral of this story is probably never ever join the mafia.
PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Paul is an idiot. Joining a criminal syndicate just to get back at someone for breaking up with you is just immature and idiotic. However, i do find this story interesting. I hope Paul comes to his senses.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2014
I didn't understand I but I still cried D':
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2014
rahhhhhhhh that was sooooooooooo sad!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/22/2014
I dont like that they died but paul in love... wow i could not beleive it even though i dont like him i am happy for him.
Freedom fighters chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Pokefan chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
That was an amazingly emotional story that kept me reading nonstop from the beginning till the end. It was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read!

Ps. The end did make me cry.
courtney chapter 2 . 1/30/2013
nice story i cried to but i made paul a diffrent girl friend name maria
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
dawn hunting
bub chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
she dies!
bub chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
noname chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
now i cant stop crying
amy chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
my friend told me to read this
i really like it
but i didn't cry
plus who is vim?
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