Reviews for Malice, Scorn and Unloved
amazinggalaxy2003 chapter 20 . 5/17
FrozenCurse chapter 20 . 12/4/2011
Okay, I have a few complaints. Well, not complaints but ermm..yeah. o.o It's a nice story with a promising plot and all that but there are quite a few typos and grammar mistakes here and there. I've also realized that your story goes too fast. One second, she's mad and then all of a sudden she loves him again. Not so realistic. So, slow it down, it's okay if she doesn't forgive him right away. Other than those, it's good. :] Continue on with it! It has some great potential!
onecelestialbeing chapter 20 . 11/29/2011
Did I not review this already? *hangs head in shame* this is another one that had me hooked! no pun intended, more please!
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 10/8/2011
Splendid nineteen chapters. Great story. Wonderful.
DestinChild chapter 18 . 1/28/2011
You just need a little inspiration from your muse thats all. Watch Peter Pan maybe that will help. But thank you for not killing Peter
DestinChild chapter 17 . 1/27/2011
But you killed Peter Pan. Couldn't he just get his butt kicked and be done with it
TinkLuvr16 chapter 17 . 1/27/2011
love it cant wait for more
TinkLuvr16 chapter 16 . 9/7/2010
love it cant wait for more
Greekleprechaun chapter 16 . 8/8/2010
I can't wait to read more! I love this twist of romance!
DestinChild chapter 16 . 8/8/2010
Oh Hook is wonderful. Anyway yay for an update
Two-twisted-girls chapter 15 . 8/2/2010
poor Jimmy..

great story :D
Umino Akiko chapter 15 . 6/15/2010
AH GAWD! JIMMY RUN! ONCE PETER LEAVES RUN! YOU'VE GOT TO WARN THEM! GO! Fly fly...! Wow sorry I got a little caried away there.
DestinChild chapter 15 . 5/31/2010
Oh a darker side to Peter Pan. I love it!
Andie Hitachiin chapter 14 . 5/30/2010
Love it! UPDATE! NOW! DO IT!
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