Reviews for Something Mutual
Summer Leah chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
God . . . that was VERY very hot. I really LOVED this and Betrayal; please, please write more lemons!
lorit chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Excellent! A great little read!
MissRe chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Nice work. You did a great job with the third person.
MyLion.MyLamb chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
You know, it's irritating not to know where they were going. What they were going to be late for. I know it's irrelevant, but I'm a little OCD and stuff like that gets to me.



I really did love this. It worked real well in third person unlimited. I enjoyed being able to see what each was feeling and and thinking.


Hope to read something from you again soon.

It's been too long.

Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Good stuff, right there. I think you originally posted this on Twilighted? I remember reading it before; it definitely deserves to be posted for the masses on fanfiction. I hope you will add on to 'Betrayal' one day.
darcy13 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Really well done. I liked the third person POV. It can be more fulfilling than the constant switching back and forth of perspectives. I so enjoyed Betrayal and Bellatouille. It's good to read something from you again. Thanks!
EdwardsKitten chapter 1 . 2/21/2009