Reviews for Jealousy
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4
Please continue so good so far
Bdoggy7 chapter 3 . 8/25/2016
You need to continue with this
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
I think you should do ruka. Her pov would be interesting. As for why she would be jealous, it's pretty obvious to anyone whose watched the manga.
Mr.Hater chapter 2 . 4/7/2016
Geez Zero you keep calling them monster but you are the Monster here you dumb shit. Its not my faulth that Yuuki belongs to Kaname. So Zero get your ass away from them you B*tch!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/13/2015
pls pls pls write the next chapter. i love t so much!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/5/2014
That was really interesting,I loved Aidou's part the 's pov was however my least favourite because of the huge paragraph at the start. When I see such a huge chunk of unseparated writing my mind automatically skips it but you did a much better job for Aidou. good luck
Spectress chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Nice but i would hv loved it if the chapters were more longer
Twilightlover955 chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
Please continue with ruka,ichijou,aidou,kain,more kaname not yuki but mainly those.
Also great story. If u get twitter we can comment more or give u ideas. But I have been waiting for u to continue so ... Continue
KanamexYuukiLover chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Please update.
Chibi Kitt chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
-giggle- your story is so cute! and I love the characters their so fun! but you made zero a bit more clingy then I imagined...oh well it was so cute!
cynics-united.sarcasm-gifted chapter 3 . 12/29/2009
Love the fic so far and for the next characters in the series can you do: Ruka and then Kaien Cross (Like with flashbacks which end with him finally awakening Yuuki and seeing them finally reuniting.) I think it would be really sweet. But... it's just a suggestion.

I'm out,

essa. \m/
Desertliliac chapter 3 . 12/25/2009
Thank you! This is so good!

I would love to read one in Ruka's perspective, although I wouldn't like to see her characterized as extremely jealous and hating Yuuki. I've read a few where's she's extremly devoted to Yuuki, and becomes her best friend!
niq31 chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
aww nice
nekosama chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
please write about R.U.K.A
Presto-chan chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
Hello! I love the idea, and would love to see more. I would like some actual scenarios though, not just a few actions and all thoughts. Though those are neat too. How about Luca being jealous of Yuuki? I like her character, and have noticed how she doesn't seem to appear very often in Yume fanfics.I would also like to see something worked out between Rima and Shiki. I don't know why, but I just do. Please don't ask me to explain :).

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