|Reviews for Potion Commotion|
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 6/15/2017
Genial h bh
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
This story gave me so much life... I fucking love it. I love YOU. You need to be, like, a real writer. Publish some shit. Keep being great.
| meagameaghan chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
YOU IDIOTS! YOU"RE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER AND YOU WERE SO CLOSE!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
you suck at this. I am way better at this. reallyyy. wow. are u new at the smut thing or somthin? WOW this REALLLLY SUCKED. I can write a WAY better Hetro smut, even know its not my thing, I write SLASH but oh well. I feel sorry 4 u. next time write better, otherwise DONT POAST IT! IT WASTES PPLS TIME READING HIS STUPID SHIT. When I was reading it i was hoping to get some action, but NOOOOOOO, U have to make it stupid as shit.
| FozuzGaoa chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Wonderful :) ! I would have liked a sequel to that :) !
| Ashboo211 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
LUVD IT FAVORITED
| Hippyhip chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Just because they forgot doesnt mean they wont just do the exact same thing again and again LOL
They wont even realize they have had sex more then once!
| HitTheRoad chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
this is amazing. amazing and kinda sad at the same time. it would be wonderful if you continued the story.
| J-walker chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Oh wow...you can tell Brad isn't that important since he's not really IN the story, sometimes while I was reading the story it felt like I was reading a script more than anything else but later...it became "all story", it was really good! I haven't seen this episode but it didn't matter. The idea was pretty cool, and I like how you ended it. Not a complete 'oh it was just a dream and a shrug off'type thing...nice ;)
| NaturalArtificalFruit chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
That was so cute,
I wish you would have finished it though
| TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
This was good. Sad ending, make a part two of it. I really want to see them happy.
| josh148513 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
this is alot like the story
Potion or Emotion?
| ThatTrueWolf chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Great story needs more!
| SummerWrites chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Love the story. :) you are an amazing writer.
| KoreWillow chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
sad ending but well written.