|Reviews for The City of Light|
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/21/2012
| Berry Smoothie chapter 9 . 8/10/2011
Must. Keep. Reading.
Very goodm story :) !
| OracleGoddessOfDelphi chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
| PantherXI chapter 16 . 2/10/2010
Great story, loved Ducky's view at the end
| Turtles in Bowties chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
My family plays WoW!Do not mock night elves...
| Pia chapter 16 . 12/6/2009
Just got a chance to read your story and I love it. Everyone was in character and I could actually see everything playing out like an episode. Good Job, but now what? Do Tony and Ziva get married, what about Tim and Abby? I waiting to read more from you, keep up the good work.
| Kira-Hazel chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Fantastic! But I do have one little issue...
If Tony as doing the David Attenborough voice then it's not an Australian accent, it's English. - David Attenborough(not sure of spelling) is not Australian (I am, though).
Apart from that, so fantastic!
| ejn10175 chapter 16 . 9/14/2009
Wow it sucks that Im just now reading the last chapter:(
It was a awesome ending and overall a great story!
I cant wait for you to start a new story :)
| Viktorija chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
I liked this story very much.:))
| Stephanie-MS chapter 16 . 8/23/2009
Awesome chapters. Its me and yes im back after being out of the loop for 3 whole long weeks. But incase your wondering I had fun and only cryed twice and that was Visitors day. When my parents ended up 2 hours late and only getting to spend an hour and a half with them.
I got back Lunch Time (my time) Yesterday and I only had a limited amount of time on the computer sense I dont have a room at the moment so I am sleeping with my sister in her room and its not fun. OMG I wish I wasn't awake right now. Its 9:18am and as you can clearly tell im on Camp Time.
| SpecialAgentWho13 chapter 16 . 8/21/2009
This was a great fic, nice job! :)
| ParisNeverEnded chapter 16 . 8/19/2009
Like it,Love it, Adore it,!
I read the final chapter and then upon realising i forgot the beggining i read it all the way through!
Can't wait for anymore stories:)
| cyn23 chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
hey, thank you for a great story, i really like it
| forevermissingwonderland chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
Wonderful ending! I particularly liked Ducky's pleasure at having been right, and the head-slaps Gibbs gave out. Who am I kidding? I always love it when Gibbs head-slaps people!
Please keep writing (and I'd be happy to help with the song lyrics)!
| sarah8902 chapter 16 . 8/16/2009
Great story! I loved all the joking around in the chapter. With Ducky winning the office pool, throwing paper balls back and forth at each other, and Gibbs' comment to Tony about him taking so long. And I loved the part where Tony found out about Ziva getting to stay in D.C. and jumping on the desk shouting it out to the office, so funny. ) Perfect ending to this story!
Can't wait for your next story, and I might be able to help you out with lyrics.. depending on what types of music you would want. Let me know if I can do anything.