|Reviews for Hunter's Moon|
| MariDark chapter 30 . 5/17
Omg, Henry Cavill as Batman?! That is so perfectly ironic nowadays x'D
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/24/2017
i feel sorry for bane, he is one of those who didnt make it though
he does seem to still have some love/compassion in his heart.
seems the bad guys got to him before the good guys which
tipped the scale...so sad but his hatred for bm is stronger...
| I'd Kill me chapter 19 . 12/13/2017
Okay, please never do that again. "I hadn't seen men in two years, really. And Bruce was definitely the best-looking man I'd ever seen, to put it mildly." If she hasn't seen any men in two years then she is not the person to be calling anyone the "best-looking man." Look, there are better way to express a character's attraction towards another. It can be just a small admittance of "Yeah, he/she is hot/beautiful/handsome" or it can be more heavy handed: "Suddenly, my ability to breath came under threat yatta yatta yatta this person is having a profound effect on my body and mind." That probably came off as rude and I'm sorry for that, that just really irked me for some reason
| I'd Kill me chapter 15 . 12/13/2017
The bit in this chapter with Diana and her mother got me thinking: what if this came up later? (It might, I haven't finished yet). When the reunion happens I imagine there would need to be some adjusting. Diana will most likely remain largely unchanged- the Themiscyrian ideals unable to take hold as a result of her upbringing in the World of Man, but these are the formative years of the Batman. This when the brutal fighting style comes in, the use of fear, and the cold/distant manner he carries himself in. All things that would prove Hippolyta's point about how terrible men can be. I'm not saying the Bruce should be cold towards Diana, but once he dons the mask he's a different person. He ruthless, efficient, and entirely independent. I think Wonder Woman might be a little shocked, especially based on your portrayal of Bruce at the ages of 14/15. I was a little surprised about how kind and personable he was given this is when he starts his training and the murders are only 4-6 years old depending on the source material. But it's an interpretation so you can take creative liberties like that so I can't complain. Good story though
| I'd Kill me chapter 12 . 12/13/2017
Hm, I'm quite late on the review here, but this is an incredibly fast paced romance. Not even a quarter of the way in and we can pretty much confirm now that they're feeling something at least resembling love towards each other. If I had to give a small piece of advice I'd slow it down next time. Maybe after the timeskip the romance should bloom, when they are more matured and understand themselves better. Plus a romance that develops in under 3 weeks is hard to sell and, no offense, but you haven't convinced me. I'm enjoying the story though, a little cringey at some clichéd parts but that's of little consequence. Looking forward to the rest
| Hope reigns on chapter 53 . 12/8/2017
Loved this story! Amazing!
| Guest chapter 32 . 12/8/2017
every time diane and bruce have a moment and kiss or try to,
you have caused interruptions ... 3 times at least now...
once or twice maybe forgiven(?) but after that it becomes quite
redundant and unrealistic and almost desperation by the author
to try to prolong this romantic interlude...it's almost
pathetic... simply put, it's asinine!
| Guest chapter 31 . 12/8/2017
this is what i mean in my previous comment...glasses, really?
evening gown, a party, black tie and she has to wear glasses?
for some reason, this really bothers me...she cant even use contacts?
not that she needs corrective lenses but, i just think the glasses for
disguise is a terrible stupid overdone idea and just disagree with it
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/8/2017
with the background about the past with diana and alkyone and
with hippolyta behaving so irrationally, i guess alkyone does
deserve some sympathy.
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/8/2017
certainly having been raised in "man's world" diana
would be very different in personality...however, i had
hoped the basic foundation remained intact ie. wisdom,
honesty, kindness, etc...
but apparently not having Athena as her patron goddess
shows...diana is lacking in wisdom..
also, i had hoped if you were going to give her a secret ID,
it would be without glasses. i always thought that was such
a hindrance for sm. instead of putting her in goofy glasses,
should have given her mask just around the eyes as ww.
since this story is original, there would have been no problem with
ww having an eye mask since her uniform is completely changed
anyways...wish you would not have given her glasses for her disguise...
just so ridiculous.
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/8/2017
there are several things i have problem with this story...
first, the kidnapping. yes, diana was raised with love from
her "mom" but when she found out the truth, everyone is
ignoring the fact that a crime has been committed. this woman
stole a baby and apparently killed some sisters while fleeing.
how can anyone condone that? ok so diana loves her since she
raised her but but but...once again, this woman kidnapped an
innocent baby from her rightful mother...so hippolyta may have
issues with motherhood and that is b/c this woman took her baby...
not very many woman automatically know how to be a mother,
they usually learn as they go and learn to become loving mothers...
well, hippolyta was robbed of that by diana's "mom"...now diana has
run away from her heritage and has decided to be with this kidnapper
as her mom... again, im not arguing that she wasn't a loving "mother"...
i am saying this woman is a criminal, no matter how jealous, how sad
you are about not having a baby, you do not take another person's child...
so now, we are rooting for diana and her kidnapper...i guess it is her
decision ultimately but i feel sad for hippolyta and feel sorry for her.
i do have other thoughts...be back with them.
| Dishon 3 chapter 53 . 11/28/2017
This story has been a great and entertaining read. Can’t wait to start the sequel
| Dishon 3 chapter 43 . 11/28/2017
A series with H/Q and BMWW? I’m all for it
| Dishon 3 chapter 9 . 11/26/2017
Ooh I’m liking Detective Diana
| Dishon 3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
I enjoyed High School Diana and Helena. I wonder if they’ll meet as heroes