Reviews for When You Thought I Wasn't Looking
Darkflame's Pyre chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
I had shivers as I read this... So touching, beautiful and bittersweet...
lissysue85 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
awe that was just so sweet and brought tears to my eyes. I love the way you incorporated the lines of the poem with a little story for each one. It was just adorable.

I can relate to certain parts of this poem so much.

You have such an amazing talent and should keep writing. I always love reading what you have written. Love ya.
Math Girl chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Finally! I can review, again! Sam, this was a lovely, and deeply affecting story. The way that you chose to interleave the words of the poem with scenes from the boys' lives brings both the characters and the literary selection to vibrant life. The ending is sad, but they'll carry Jeff and Lucy with them forever, and pass those lessons and memories on to their own children. Beautifully written, thank you!

Little Miss Bump chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
*sigh* Silly ff has been barring me from logging in for the past few days, so sorry for not reviewing sooner.

I loved this though! CC sent me a copy of the poem ages ago, and I remember thinking about how easily applicable it would be with the Tracy family. You did a really great job with this one, my friend. Loved the way that each of the boys got a section to themselves. Plus it focused on Jeff once or twice too, which was nice. The section about Lobo's death was particularly moving.

Superb fic. Keep up the good work!
err - who am i chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
It's really, really lovely and beautifully written. I absolutely adore it. Reminds me a lot of things I've done and missed. And what I want to do.

Thank you.
KatZen chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
You killed him! You killed him! WHY? It made me tear up, especially as it was the ending part.

I loved the way you separated each little shot with the words of the poem; it was really efective.

Awesome story and it's going to my faves.
criminally charmed chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
That was nicely done and I am pleased that you were able to use it in that manner. sniff. You killed Jeff! Wah!
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
What an awesome oneshot and very inspiring. it most definitely proves the pooint that what you do affects others. nd the wonderful things that Jeff and Lucy did in their everyday normal lives influenced their children to grow up to be wonderful men because of it.