|Reviews for Over the Edge|
| Anime Onnanoko chapter 8 . 11/16/2012
Really good story so far, please update soon.
| Casey chapter 8 . 10/28/2009
I dont usually comment of fics. but in this case, i just had to! Good job! Please inform me about the next chapters WHEN they come out! This fic. was AWESOME!:o)
| punkiemonkie chapter 8 . 10/25/2009
It’s been so long since I’ve read this, I am ashamed! DX I thought I’d drop by to leave you a review though, because I know writers’ block is messing with you right now, and I was hoping that a review might encourage you. :3 About your author’s note: I totally agree with you about using the “fluff” word. To me, it sounds like cheesy romance, and that’s not what I like to read or write. I say “sugar” instead, because that sounds more like clean romance to me. ;) Anyhow, on to the story! Oh, thank goodness Cid is okay! Everyone needs a Cid in their group. You totally nailed his personality too, it made me laugh. Go Tifa! We girls always have the advantage of being able to act hurt to gain sympathy, and then pounce! Lol, poor Cloud. He had no idea she would play dirty. XD And I have to say, you did an excellent job with the kissing scene! Fluff definitely isn’t the right word. That was, dare I say it, pretty damn hot! Lol. Great ending to the chapter too; it leaves you wondering about what is going to happen next…
I really liked this chapter, it feels very…fleshed out, I guess is the best way to put it. There’s so much more detail in both the plot and the description than there was in the first few chapters, and it’s a lot easier to read because of it. It’s incredible how much your writing has improved just during writing this one story, you should be very proud! :D
| LadySephiroth030490 chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
AW! The lake scene kind of had me wondering but never mind. See you have an awesome imagination. nice chapter.
| gamefangirl chapter 8 . 7/27/2009
Love it. Good job. More chapters to read I presume)
| CloTi Kismet chapter 8 . 7/22/2009
At last a K.I.S.S.!
things are really starting to heat up!
| StrifeVsTribal chapter 8 . 7/19/2009
the kissing scene was very believable! well done!
| Rodidor chapter 8 . 7/19/2009
This is a very good story and it's well written also.
| Accidental Exhibitionist chapter 8 . 7/19/2009
*claps* yay! they kissed! can't wait for the next chapie!
| TiffanyLockheart chapter 8 . 7/18/2009
Daw they finally kissed! _ i hate thunder! SERIOUSLY! it runies the moments. Just "ve You" wah X) cant wait for more! _
| vLuna chapter 8 . 7/18/2009
Aw, they finally kiss! That was sweet, you wrote it wonderfully :)
| Dragon Reverb chapter 8 . 7/18/2009
LOL, nice.. UPDATE!
| Cladnplaid chapter 8 . 7/17/2009
NAW! So sweet! They kissed! *claps* teeheeXD gereat chapter! And Cid's alright! Yay! lol:D
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 8 . 7/17/2009
UWE HE HE, GLAD TO SEE THE TWO FINALLY KISS, AND SAD TO SEE HE DIDN'T SAY THOSE LAST 4 WORDS, AND IF YOU GO ANY FARTHER ON THE LOVE YOU MIGHT WANNA GO UP A RATING, YAHAHAHAHAHA
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 7 . 6/28/2009
UWE HE HE, PUT ME ON YOUR LIST OF REVIEWERS BECAUSE I'LL BE KEEPING AN EYE ON THIS, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA