Reviews for Breath of Heaven
phantasmagoriaa chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
brilliant! i feel really sorry for edward though... *sob* :P i think edward has the best family ever!
Nikkaayy95 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
it was so good! shit i wonder if i could have my dad do that for me and robert pattinson...
hayleyhoo chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
Ah I don't want Edward to die :( I will cry :( Lol that rhymes. anywho I liked the chapter and aw he got to meet Will LoL :D
beautiful ink chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
cant wait for an update!
AprilBaby30 chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
I loved this chapter. D
SukiYo1910 chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
OH. MY. GOD. WILL. F*ING. SMITH! AAHH! I LOVE WILL SMITH! HE IS SO COOL AND I LLOOVVEE THE FRESH PRINCE! AAHH! IM SO JEALOUS OF YOU EDWARD! And he was a total crack up in Hancock...anywho, loved the chapter! plase update ASAP
FRK921 chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
aw...Edward!

and seriously...awesome surprise!
mygoldeneyedangel chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
So cute. I loved their vacation! And Edward is SO sweet to donate his college fund to charity. That was a very sweet touch, I liked it.

I loved his conversation with Will Smith. Very touching. And he had some good advice.

I feel bad for Edward because he is feeling worse. Poor guy. I can't imagine how scary it would be to go through what he's going through. Especially when you start noticing the changes within your self.

I can't wait to see what happens. I hope the numbness turns out to be nothing too serious.

Great update!

Alison
AndyBCM chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
another great chapter, really can not wait for more. its adictive lol.

loved when edward was like "five more minutes" that was cute and funny.

it seemd like a very realistic chapter.

loved the bella and edward interaction. can not wait to see their relationship to develop.

update quick xx
Nikkaayy95 chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
god please tell me one of these things are right

1) bellas some type of vampire or angle or fucking mermaid, so she can save edward!

2) theres a cure! please lord!

3) bella is sick too! i mean like if edward dies, bella should die too!
Nikkaayy95 chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
god i really hope he doesnt die. DONT LET HIM DIE!
Nikkaayy95 chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
god poor edward :(
Mrs.Deadpool chapter 4 . 4/5/2009
its so sad. please tell me she's a vampire or something because i'm already crying i won't be able to take it if he dies
BlueShoe35 chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
aw. cute chapter!

bella and edward are so adorable together!
Miles333 chapter 4 . 4/3/2009
*wipes away tear* I have a really bad feeling about how this story will end...with Edward DYING! 0.0
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