Reviews for Breath of Heaven
Leigh chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
Really good first chapter. I love angst stories about Edward so please update really soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens.
SukiYo1910 chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
it was marvelous! I loved it! please update soon!
fentyang chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
Wow it's a good chapter...you are such a good author and have a brilliant idea

Hope u will update soon
lidyaunited chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I like this story...plz continue it

I want to see more...plz
Vampirechic77 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
OME! I really am going to get sucked into another one of you stories! lol kidding! I love all of your work and I hope that the next chapter to this one comes up soon!

Thanks!

Samantha (a.k.a. twilightgalluvsEdward101!)
Mythology chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I really hope you update soon. It's an intriguing start and I want to know what happens next.
JayLynn-wrtngdncr chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
im kinda confused. its good, just a little confusing. help me out here, i want to understand wats goin on, like is eddie human?
Nessie'sLaTuaCantante chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
So . . . sad . . . OMR!

I loved it!

Haha.

Go to my profile, and look up my stories!

But seriously, the story is going to be great!

~Nessie's Singer~
AndyBCM chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
O. My. God…

You can’t actually leave the story there! Update quick!

I hope Edwards okay and poor Carlisle its so sad.

I can’t wait to see this story as it develops.
WinterGuarder15 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Amazingly good beginning! please continue!
tic tac toe 03 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
OMG please carry this on it sounds amazing. Great ideas and writing.

Tac
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
One word: CONTINUE!

I really think that this is one AWESOME story! I'm glad that Miles3 told me about this!:)

Please update soon,

Watcher
Miles333 chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
OMG, that was awesome! 0.0 *is breathless* Is Edward a ghost or something? Please update really soon, okay? I MUST have an update! ! !

Thanks for the awesome read (so FAR),

-M3
mygoldeneyedangel chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I think you have a really good start here. I really want to know what happened to Edward that caused him to end up in the hospital in the first place. And then, obviously, I want to know what happens next. What caused Carlisle to fall by his bed. I really hope that you chose to continue this story because I think it sounds very very promising.
Margirli13 chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
what. happens. next.
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