Reviews for Shampoo
Lover of Pokemon chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Did May...make him...get hard? Interesting...quite interesting...nice fanfic btw.
killem21 chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
HA! Pokeballs
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
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PurpleRock chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
hehe too cute too cute! something i would sooo do to my BFF! XD
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
It was okay, you could make it longer. The whole idea was cute. I would specify how old they are and other stuff like that.
edoe101 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
hehehe... lol

it was funny i have to admit
BritRecon chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Short and cute. I liked it a lot, good job!
Shadow09 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
That is so messed up. Poor Ash.
Vivianasaur chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I loved it!
Gerbilftw chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
That was just plain evil!
TwinsWeasley chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Gr8 fanfic! But I actually don't understand the last part... Can ya mail me?
zeaeevee chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
ahhaha.

it was cute and funny at the same time. haha.

i cant stop laughing. rofl.
LuciferIX chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Okay I'm just going to assume that these two are already together by this point cause otherwise the situation would probably be a little different if they were still just friends.

Even if this was nothing but an idea that just hit you it was quite funny. Although from Ash's POV excluding the bit of embarrassment that he received from having his "partner in crime" stand up I'd have to say that it probably wasn't the worst punishment that hes had. Not to mention that May was making up for missing it by getting more than just a couple things out of it herself.

A slightly more mature thinking fic but good nonetheless. I'm glad that you decided to put this up here. Keep 'em coming!