Reviews for Forgotten Shoes and Broken Hearts
Vera-Henry chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Haha. Xlromp and Frig and Lou. You make me feel normal. It's nice.
Vampir3.S3duction chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I thought the first chap. was good :). Hope the next one comes soon!
ILoveReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Wow! This has got to be one of the greatest Cinderella/Twilight fanfics I've ever read! :-)

-ILoveReadingAndWriting
Cleverly.-.Insane chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I luve how you came up with this!

its awesome and i Do luve me some Bets.

Dunno why.. Hm

Anyway!

I was reading this while i hid from my stlker -Who is an elephant- and but then i had to write this reply because it was so good. So he found me. Then he was all like

"Wutcha dooing" And i was like

"Nothing just reading this awesome story"

And hes all like

"really?"

...

Anyway long story short now.. He wants to 'meet' you.

Dont worry though because i wont let him.

Your too kool to be stalked by an elephant. and anyways if he Did stalk you then you could update as fast. So. I Will Not Let Him Find You.

*ponders*

But what if he did then you could be hiding from him and the only thing to do was write then you WOULD update faster.. Hm

Maybe! we would be hiding Together and then i would read over your shoulder and be like

"that word is Missing its 'I'"

And youd be like

"What?"

and id be like

"its spelt with an I"

And youd be like

"huh?No it isnt" and id be like

"okai continue"

...

Then id be all

"Oh that is sso good! Nice one"

But if i did our stalker would find us and we'd have to hide all over again.

No! i will not let him find us!

Darn you Stalker!

Oopsi.

That was a little loud. NOW WE GOTTA HIDE AGAIN!

Darnit!

So i resolve not to let him find you!

Have funn

And Update soon please. but dont feel like you have to hide to do it. I'll take care of the Elephant.

Sher D
Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Ohh I like this so far! I no doubt will be in heartfail though when he "shoes" the wrong chick..UGH. But you say he finds her again...le sigh. Can't wait for more!
TouchofRedemptionHintofElation chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
love it and cant wait to read more!