Reviews for One Small Detour
Gomizia chapter 1 . 6/9
oh naruto why are you so dense ㅠㅠ
But that was really cute!
ZirconK chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
Best clueless Naruto haha. Love it alot. I hope someone has started most clueness Naruto theme. Will search it next to read for I'm still a newbie in fanfic.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
I love the irony in this! XD
jex the dork chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
I dont think i ever face palmed that hard before o why r. U so dense U BAKA
SonOfNenji chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
This belongs in the main work, because it a) fits one of the Thirty Kisses themes [#19 red], b) has a kiss in it [the girl kisses a log via Kawarimi, as you mentioned) and c) it focuses on both of the main characters Naruto [mainly] and Hinata.

This doesn't belong here as an omake in this collection.

You should move it, dude!

RetiredForLife chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Poor, oblivious Naruto...
NoeticSky chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This was sweeter than candy-floss shaped like baby bunnies and fluffier than a kitten's tummy.


Domo Arigatou!
aryaputra chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Naruto's just asking to be hit. No one should be THAT oblivious.

Of course, I'll do the hitting part. :}...
MythicGR66 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
love the over parts as well
ranbo neal chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Very cool! I love what you have done with this short story. You stay with the characters so their personalities fit with the manga and anime.
RisingMist chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Damn you Naruto! You're almost as oblivious as I once was! :D I simply loved reading this one. I can't wait to see more of the main story. :) I wish I knew where that challenge was, so that I could take it to. I'm going to do some googling and post my story if I can find the prompt.
Kataangforever2 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
:D:D:D:D Naruto's an idiot :D But he's still soo cuteee :D
FairoNeko chapter 1 . 5/5/2010

Clueless Naruto
AnimeRose93 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
lol, ah, love the clueless naruto XD
Hina the half heart chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Naruto really is clueless...This was very amusing! _
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