|Reviews for Clockwork|
| Yakuloooo chapter 20 . 3/7
Great story! I'm from Ao3 and it's so good to read it all in one go!I can't wait to read the second part right mow
| Ida chapter 20 . 7/7/2022
I have been reading this story all night! You truly have a way with words. And when i realised i was on the last line of the last chapter i nearly started crying. I NEED more!
Gonna start reading the sequel right away. I am truly captivated. (Sorry for my halfbad english, love from Sweden!)
| hispersephone-hernightmare8 chapter 3 . 1/21/2022
I can't with this chapter. The joker's inner musings are so entertaining, and the underlying creepiness when he thinks about how cute she looks while she's literally terrified is so chilling the more you dwell on it. Even while he's angry, too. Also. The end of this chapter gets me every time, poor baby Taylor! she's so precious I can't even stand it, I get so proud of her when she kicks Mr. Clownman lmao like get him girl! Wonderful chap
| hispersephone-hernightmare8 chapter 2 . 1/21/2022
Oh wow. Going back and re reading is even more intense, this moment where he sees her injuries and has to ask her where they came from. Poor little one! My heart breaks for her and it's so heartbreaking because abuse is so common, things like this happen to children all the time. For her to end up being found by the mass murderer the Joker and even he gets moved by her fearful reaction to the spill and is feeling for her really says something about how different two evils can be. Someone who causes so much pain and bruises yet seeing the effects of child abuse still gives a particular gut punch, even to him. It's depraved on a different level, and speaks to how already, even in just one of their first real interactions, Taylor is getting under his skin and pulling emotion and empathy from someone who has NONE of that usually. I also think you made his response perfect, knowing he wouldn't feed her bullshit like 'it's going to get better' or anything like that. Heartbreaking but beautiful chapter
| hispersephone-hernightmare8 chapter 1 . 1/20/2022
The atmospheric language you use in this first chapter is what really stuck with with me for years after reading. I can smell the dusty air, I can feel the floor underneath my feet. I think it's so magical reading something that transports the reader as vividly as your works do. Also, their first interaction is so intense, as someone looking into the situation all I wanted to do was pick Taylor up and run far away with her. To have to hold my breath and see what he might do to someone so defenseless and innocent kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. An iconic beginning to an epic storyline!
| Abhinav Hellfire chapter 9 . 12/7/2021
This is perfect! I love this story
| Abhinav Hellfire chapter 8 . 12/7/2021
No fuckin way! the twist
| SpeedForce 1229 chapter 20 . 12/4/2021
Beautiful and tragic. I just finished Arcane and despite being blonde I kept seeing Taylor as Powder in my mind. Really enjoyed this. Sorry I’m late to the party.
| SludgyHammer chapter 20 . 11/5/2021
What a story, at just the first chapter, I was invested in it immediately. It remains realistic to Joker’s character which is not what many authors manage to get right, I’m glad I found you.
| HeldAtRansom chapter 1 . 8/19/2021
I'm re-reading this. Because, why not? Why not return to my roots, your roots - hell, this fandom's roots?
And within minutes of Taylor's introduction, I'm reminded why I was so invested from the get-go. Her and her big green eyes, and her cautious innocence, and her love and care for Teddy. :') I'm so excited to read this with little memory of all the ins and outs, so ready to refresh my knowledge of one of the few OCs (or perhaps the only) that I'd genuinely like to meet.
I'm sorry my communication has been poor and nonexistent as of late, life has not been kind, but I just wanted to let you know I do think of you and wonder how you are. :)
Take care and speak soon, xo
| sweetcga chapter 20 . 9/21/2020
a great ending. stays true to how the joker would react.
| sweetcga chapter 18 . 9/21/2020
i hope taylor becomes stronger and more independent as a teenager. i just always love strong female oc's in fanfics. its hard for me to read female oc's who are always crying or scared 24/7. It would be cute if she dyed her hair like harley's sorta but in a way that doesn't show her as a replacement of her, ya know?
| sweetcga chapter 13 . 9/21/2020
im determined to finish b4 my day ends
| Caro chapter 1 . 9/20/2020
my friend recommended the third book but then i realized i had to read the 1st. I think this first chapter is really amazing and i can't wait to read all the way to the third book to discuss with her everything.
| Adrian Blba chapter 20 . 7/24/2020
I just finished your story yesterday night. You're so an amazing writer ! I'm so frustrated, because I'm french, so I'm probably making a lot of mistakes in this review.
But I would like to tell you how much your story shake me, how much the thematic is for me oddly familiar. I write myself stories where there's very often a strange and longlife connection between a woman and an unorthodox fatherhood figure. In your story, I found all that in a way, and it contents me beyond any limit. And I would like to talk to you, to encourage you to continue to write, fanfics or anything you'd like to write, because you are very talented. You can't imagine how much I liked and like your story. Thank you for your generosity, to share to everybody your wonderful creativity. And I would like to give you so more encouragement, but in the same time, I feel myself so limited in the english language... I hope I succeeded, with my message, to enlighten your day, and your mind, like yo did it for me with your beautiful story. I can't wait to read the sequel :D ! I will let you a review when I read the first chapter of Blackout :) !
Thank you again, you have a brilliant mind.
From Paris, with all my gratitude,