|Reviews for Clockwork|
| lala3366 chapter 20 . 3/6
Yes! I just found this and boy am I happy I did! Now I hear a sequel is in order? So is the sequel going to be where is left off or a few years later? What happened to the girl? Foster home? Does she remember Mr. J? Will she be corrupted? When does Mr. J escape again? Can't wait for the next one!
| Lizzie Shadows chapter 20 . 3/2
Can't log in right now, but this is amazing! I loved this so much! I eagerly look forward to reading your sequel. :)
| Muteandnowblind2 chapter 20 . 2/19
Idk why but I thought ya were another author for some dang reasonXD
Forgive me for that last question will yaXD
I had a complete brain fart thereXD
I might as well be blind tooXD
| Mutebutnotblind chapter 20 . 2/19
Brilliant, as always lol
So what's the sequel's name? Ya have any idea when it'll be out? I'm so excited man! And I know this is bad to do, but ya won't bite my head off if I ask about The Gender Fallacy as well will ya? It was just a really good piece of work and I hate to see it go.
| GyreHost chapter 20 . 2/9
! I love this book so much! The premise is equal parts adorable, terrifying, and twisted as fuck. I love it! 3 I'm going to go binge read the sequel (or what you have of it at least). Who needs sleep, amiright?! *stage whispers* I've been up for DAAAAAYYYS! lol
| lorisuit chapter 20 . 2/4
I just read this whole story story again (I've read it multiple times because it's just sssssooo goooooddddd) because I wanted jump right into your updated chapters of Blackout. Even though I read them all as you posted them, there's something satisfying about reading in large quantities for me. I think you're a terrific writer and although you say you wrote Clockwork when your were a a little bit inexperienced, this is phenomenal. Coming from someone who is still too terrified to put pen to paper, I think what you do is so incredible and I thank you! Don't take what you have for granted and continue to have courage to write something everyday, even if it is just a ten words. You're an inspiration!
| The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 21 . 2/1
Sequel? What with everything, basically, returning to the status quo I had thought this was concluded.
Well, then, at least now I can go check it out then.
| The Freaks chapter 20 . 12/21/2016
This was so much better than I had been expecting. I thought it was going to be the storyline of Joker finding a little girl and then coming to like, and even care, for her. Then something bad would happen between them like he'd attack someone or she would see him on the news and freak. Then someone would find out about her and take her or she would run, and then he'd rescue her and it would be a happy ending. But this, this was better than that. I loved it. In a way, he still cared for her, but in a possessive, sort of "i like you but I'm a crazy murderous psychopathic clown“ kinda way. He didn't love her, that much was certain though. He was still sadistic and cruel to the poor kid. I also liked that he didn't coddle Taylor or go out of his way to care for her (for the majority of the time). I did think it was interesting that he was angry at her mother for abusing the kid, I was just sorta surprised.
I, again, love this story so much. He's crazy, a murderer, a criminal, and a psychopath, yet he's my favorite villian, and probably one of my favorite characters of all time.
| The Freaks chapter 19 . 12/18/2016
Well, this shit took a turn and got even better!
And when I say "shit", I didnt mean it in a "this stuff is shit, why would you even write it" kinda way. This is really good. Haha
And, though Joker is my favorite, two-face Harvey dent is pretty cool
| The Freaks chapter 9 . 12/17/2016
Haha I was at chapter fourteen when I thought back to my last comment and realized I was wrong. Anna isn't related to Durante, but was just his prostitute. Ha I guess i'm not as good as I thought. Fuck, I'm super embarrassed now too…
| The Freaks chapter 8 . 12/17/2016
I knew it. He aid that he had a grown daughter and I said "Shit, what do you bet that's the kids mom?" Damn I'm good.
Haha I'm joking. Anyway I think your book is going great, and I do really like how you're painting Joker. He's still his murderous clown self, but he's showing a little bit of a human side, albiet only to himself, and then very begrudgingly so.
Looking forward to how this'll play out!
| ExtraordinaryWeirdo chapter 20 . 12/10/2016
It was hella a ride for me!
I just loved this story with every ounce of my existence. Honestly! you're such a talented writer. I liked Taylor's character even though she was too annoying at times and I absolutely loved your take on Joker. He is such a complicated fascinating being, the last chapter was like the punchline of the story pure awesomeness you can't just put it in words. I write too so I know how it's really difficult to write a satisfying last chapter but you did it in the best way possible and for that I, as a reader, am thankful. The joker was absolutely vile and scary but sometimes I just couldn't stop myself from smiling at how cute (I know it's weird to put the Joker and cute in a same sentence lol, talk about bad jokes ) he'd become pondering over the abnormality that surrounded him with Taylor around, it was a great characterization of him to mix the horrifying image of what a monster he really is and has absolutely no sympathy at all with just something that wasn't quite out of his character but still unusual for a man like him. I truly loved your OCs as well. they were so real, so relateable. especially Jacob I really liked him, we didn't really get to see what happened to him, huh? anyway I wish you'd write more of the Joker, I just seem to not get enough of him lately.
With great gratification
| ExtraordinaryWeirdo chapter 7 . 12/9/2016
I know it's pretty late but I just had to say... not that I'm new to this fandom but I just found this story and it's just one of my all time favorite in this site in Nolan Trilogy. I've been always a fan since the movie released and now as the time goes I grow more and more fascinated by it and especially the Joker and all the brilliant ideas the writers here come up with and share with us. The other story that I really liked in here and got me going for a week was 'Bad Jokes' and now this one is so magnatic that I can't just stop reading it. Whether I'm at home or work or school I just love this. The idea of the Joker and little kid is just so fascinating and so intriguing cause I have the same idea as you I don't think Joker just kill a little kid because 1) there's no fun in it ( and we all know that is the Joker's main concern) and 2) Joker wouldn't just do things on a whim I mean he practically does but not really ( I don't know if that makes sense lol) but nonetheless this is a great idea and I just can't wait to finish this and share my overall opinion with you! You have just become one of my favorite author on this site!
| princessjoke chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
I openly gasped at this story
| princessjoke chapter 20 . 11/20/2016
I don't even know where to start. This story is just...wow. Like I cannot fathom the correct word. Amazing isn't good enough. Best fanfic I've ever read, I don't want to sound overly emotional but honestly im a wreck haha I love this story so much and oh my gOD THERES A SEQUEL BRUH YA BRINGING CHRISTMAS EARLY. I've read this over the course of 4 days and couldn't get it out of my head! Incredible writing!