|Reviews for A Series of Connecting the Dots|
| MimiTaylor chapter 28 . 12/7
*sigh* What a great way of telling a story. Seeing how differently 1 event can be interpreted by 2 people was brilliant. Great story, great steamy love scenes, well written - homerun!
| BrothersMacManus chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
Oh! I'm so happy and now feel guilty for unloading my dislike for Mike on DreamingInColor. How wonderful she is again. I feel bad.
| Fionaaa chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
gaahhh love it love it love it!
| Kylie chapter 12 . 11/10/2013
Noo! Now Harry's going to feel oblighted to have sex with mike on Saturday! Why did they have to make up :(
| Micehell WD chapter 28 . 10/18/2013
Perfect *cries in corner* Just Perfect
| Carling chapter 28 . 7/18/2013
Magical blueberry muffins are on their way! By the end I'd fallen in love with Harry, too, as he grew up and overcame his flaws. Draco, of course, had me from the very beginning because I just knew he was going to see the light. Harry was very unpredictable and made the story an emotional roller coaster. Draco oddly enough anchored it for me, as he anchored Harry against his fate. Both points of view were equally and delightfully well written. It was an amazing duet!
Mike was a very interesting and aggravating character. It would have been so easy if he were outright nasty and had gotten nasty revenge. But he was a genuinely good guy and it was painful to watch Harry did to him. He was still incredibly annoying though and I was relieved to be rid of him.
It's kind of funny, but if I interpreted what I read correctly, when it came to blokes, Draco was actually more of a virgin than Harry was. He never blew a guy, had only one encounter on the receiving end of a bj with Blaise, and his experience of " topping " was just sex with two girls. Harry did more than that, and more frequently with Mike.
| Carling chapter 20 . 7/18/2013
It's amazing how much intrigue and menace the women add to the story. And brainpower. Definitely not the weaker sex. I'd never want cross Narcissa or Hermione!
| Carling chapter 14 . 7/18/2013
Okay, I FINALLY understand Harry more now. I still think he's horribly oblivious but then, he always was in canon.
| Carling chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Oh so THAT is how it was Ginny...she got a bit presumptuous and ahead of herself, did she? Still, poor kid, Mike was legitimately with her when Harry swooped in and broke them up, which is a real ugly thing to do to a friend, which is what Ginny was supposed to be at the time. So frankly, I do NOT see Ron siding with his sister as a betrayal. I haven't read the other reviews here but I wouldn't be shocked to find I'm the only one unsympathetic to Harry. I understand he is a hot mess, facing doom and all. I understand people make mistakes that hurt other people...I know I have. But he is taking it all to an annoying level. I'm rooting for Draco. He's messed up in a way I can tolerate better.
| Carling chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
I'm here on Chapter 6. It's fun to see the work of two authors trading off on a story. But whoa, Harry is a real short-sighted self righteous prick so far. He goes on and on about Mike not trusting him and about Malfoy and Blaise being "loose". Potter calling the kettle black? First he steals Mike away from Ginny, and then in turn cheats on Ginny with Mike, and then whines about everyone getting pissed off and disgusted with him being a lying cheat. What an obnoxious self righteous jerk!
Draco is a jerk, too,but he gets it honestly. I don't know what to say about Harry. Ugh. He is nasty.
| bethi13212 chapter 28 . 6/28/2013
Here's the greatest thing about this story: it slipped back and forth between you seamlessly. Loved it from start to finish. Thank you both for sharing this story.
| DeiStarr chapter 28 . 6/9/2013
Loved it! It was awesome to get dual perspectives on the story; you'd never know it was eritten by two different people, either - very well written. Great collab!
My only complaint is how long it took Harry to break up with Mike and that he kept on being intimate with him in the meanwhile. That kind of stunk. :-P
| ClaireBouldwin chapter 28 . 8/18/2012
That was fantastic :) Great job, you guys!
| You-Know-Who chapter 12 . 7/19/2012
I really do find this story adorable! The only thing (I know, I know, here comes a teensy criticism) is that Harry sounds like a girl. Like, his voice and thoughts are that of a girl. He wasn't like that in the beginning, but he sounds like that now. It's probably because you guys are using first-person point of view, and not the one that JK Rowling used in her books. But I still love it :D reading on
| You-Know-Who chapter 2 . 7/18/2012
This story is getting really interesting, and funny! :D I can't wait to see more! But I really really hate all of the Gryffindorks, especially Ron and Hermione, for abandoning Harry like that. I can see why, but still, its cruel. :( I hope they regret their behavior later.