Reviews for Hands on Me
A chapter 83 . 2/7
First of all, I think the spanking was VERY immature and you ARE promoting abuse. That is not right at all, and you are basically telling young girls that this is alright behavior. Whether or not they are adults and married, this is wrong. She should NOT be spanked as punishment when it HURTS and then apologies. He should be saying "sorry." Wow...just wow.
Mckenna chapter 64 . 2/5
I love your story, but I cringe every time Nessie says "my Jacob." It doesn't sound good in my head...
Guest chapter 86 . 1/17
Honestly this story is a great read. However I feel like there were chapters where there was no point, like you kept repeating the same scenes over and over and it took so long for them to resolve problems or whatever. And I just feel like it wasn't properly concluded without an epilogue. Other than those things tho the story was really interesting!
Twilight-Survivor chapter 86 . 10/12/2015
Hands on me was the first piece of fan fiction I've ever read, I had stumbled upon it by accident looking for a quote I remembered that one of my daughters wanted to read and I found this. I always imagined fan fiction being poorly written, badly developed stories by twelve year olds. I can say that that was one assumption I was obviously waaaay off base on. While I didn't agree with all the ways you developed Jacobs character, I found all of it completely believable. I think Nessie started out coming off to innocent, more than that, uneducated. The not understanding why she needs to squeeze her legs together aspect, you made it clear throught the story that this WAS something she had been educated on, the physiology anyway and I had a hard time believing that such a brilliant & educated young woman with such exceptionally brilliant and educated family members wouldn't have covered that. However that was the only real criticism I had over the entire story. I loved it. My husband took my daughters away to my Inlaws vacation house for the holiday weekend (I'm still healing from back surgery so I couldn't go) and I found myself unable to put it down. I read almost straight through the weekend. I didn't get offended as others did by their goodbye in the bathroom or the spanking. I understood why it happened and while I couldn't actually see my vision of Jacob doing such a thing, I understand why it was put there, why That would make Nessie feel better on some level. I loved the story and I plan on reading your other ones as well. I was shocked at the details, the visualizations and the realism of their intimacy... I'm a 35 year old mother of all girls who had been married for 15 years so I've obviously "been there and done that" with my husband and I highly doubt I would have been able to, in my own writings, make it feel as realistic, visual and passionate as you did. Then i read that these things came not from your life experience but your imagination... I'm floored, absolutely in awe of your talent. I'm desperately wanting to read the sequel but when I went through your story list nothing jumps out by title or description line as the sequel to hands on me. Please tell me which one it is, I would like to start with the sequel next and then go to the one from Jacobs point of view. Thank you again for your story, I truly truly loved reading it! Your a very talented young woman!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/2/2015
Nessie's feelings and ideas are fabulous in all chapters:-)
Guest chapter 38 . 8/2/2015
Ever since I read this story,i am reading this again and really have awesome ideas and perfect feelings and emotions are very well described.i find it very interesting and new every time I read 's and jake's feelings through all the chapters are fabulous. Lovely!Lovely!Lovely!
Guest chapter 86 . 7/18/2015
Marvelous story!
Guest chapter 86 . 7/18/2015
Best story I have ever read of jake and nessie.
Guest chapter 86 . 7/18/2015
Aww!so 'sweet' n 'touchy'.very lovely and awesome story.
linhphuongnguyen1991 chapter 74 . 7/6/2015
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Guest chapter 18 . 7/1/2015
Good and descriptive. I love the detail.
alixandria chapter 86 . 6/7/2015
I love this story and can't wait for the sequel...
alixandria chapter 85 . 6/7/2015
awe! I love Jac0b's shocked and excited reaction to the baby...
alixandria chapter 84 . 6/7/2015
baby news! yay!
alixandria chapter 83 . 6/6/2015
Nessie needs to tell him about their baby...
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