|Reviews for Hidden Truths|
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/25
| Breanna3593 chapter 5 . 1/17
You're far too redundant in your writing and it's quite annoying. I literally skip words, sometimes full phrases, because it's too much.
I don't know why I keep reading - I should probably stop to save my sanity - but I'm looking for the climax to the story, I suppose. Unfortunately, it seems like it would be anticlimactic anyway because of all this useless build up. I think I will stop reading now.
I really wouldn't have even commented, because I don't want to be rude to a writer, but it's my hope that you learn to take a look at your work and cut down on wordiness. It's better to be concise sometimes - keep that in mind.
| NatNicole chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
This is bloody awesome!
| Rayanna Kaydence chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
LOVED THIS FANFIC!
Best I've read so far :)
| chyaraskiss chapter 6 . 7/15/2014
This is such a fun fic. I would love to see a sequel to continue the storyline.
| VeronicaJRiddle chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
This is so...so sad! Kiristeen! Stop tugging at my emotions...*sniff* V J
| lily pond chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
Continue pls kk
| Blood Red Gun chapter 7 . 6/3/2013
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2013
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
You changed Mrs. Granger's middle name in this chapter...
| KW2009 chapter 7 . 11/17/2012
Was good reading a snape-is-someone's-father-other-than-Harry story for once!
| KW2009 chapter 6 . 11/17/2012
Oh this chapter made me lol.
"Okay," Albus muttered just barely loud enough for Severus to hear, "now I feel like I'm refereeing a bloody tennis match."
| Montara chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
After reading so many stories with HGSS as a couple it was awkward for me to read about them as father and daughter. But it was interesting to see the interaction between them in this situation. Thank you
| littlebear62007 chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
| some girl chapter 7 . 7/15/2012
this was a great story i only review now bescaus now its done and i have to tell you that this was and is a great story