Reviews for What Is Going On With Her?
Reithandina chapter 10 . 12/14/2015
awwww. you ended it so suddenly! D: I hate short stories, always robbed of a real ending. I'd have loved to read their reunion and what would happen after.
TinaF chapter 10 . 9/14/2015
Loved it!
GothicTBell chapter 10 . 7/20/2015
I love the story... please update. Want to know what happens next!..
AmberLG1994 chapter 11 . 2/15/2015
Love the story. Please update. I need 2 no how this works and i want 2 c edward's reaction.
Jasper-Damon's Princess chapter 11 . 1/7/2015
Omg! I loooove this story
I love Jasper he's so...perfect :P
I can't wait to read what happens next I'm dying to know what happens so please update soon :D
Belle
Calyptra chapter 9 . 11/4/2014
Alice thinks Bella looked sexy? Will the little human get more vamps in her bed? Oh I can totally see a tricycle
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 11 . 6/12/2014
I so look forward to reading more of this delicious story. Update soon please!

Kathy
chanur chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
Hot
GeezerWench chapter 11 . 1/20/2014
Oh. Good.

Okay, Honey, I've been married almost 34 years. I'd suggest a very l-o-n-g engagement.

Congrats on your Masters.
GeezerWench chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
Certainly was a shift.

Now, the question is ... how did Alice not know Edward was for her when she and Jasper first showed up at the Cullens?
GeezerWench chapter 9 . 1/20/2014
Well, this should be interesting.
GeezerWench chapter 8 . 1/20/2014
Edward. Once and done?

What the hell is his problem? I could pretty much believe he'd feel guilty over "driving Bella" to seek relief elsewhere, but you'd think, once he had it, he'd be back for more!

Boy's a moron.

Yeah, Bella. Tell Edward to take a hike! Go get that cowboy!
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
Now, how could Edward be a "great" lover if her hadn't ever had sex before?

ew

I want Jasper!
GeezerWench chapter 6 . 1/20/2014
Damn. Alice was WAY forgiving.

And Edward? It's all right because he'd end up married to Bella?

they seem awfully damn ... calm.
GeezerWench chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
That was pretty hot.

and then, technically, you wrote it well, too.

Oh, yes, eau de Jasper all over her!
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