Reviews for What Is Going On With Her?
GothicTBell chapter 10 . 7/20
I love the story... please update. Want to know what happens next!..
AmberLG1994 chapter 11 . 2/15
Love the story. Please update. I need 2 no how this works and i want 2 c edward's reaction.
Jasper-Damon's Princess chapter 11 . 1/7
Omg! I loooove this story
I love Jasper he's so...perfect :P
I can't wait to read what happens next I'm dying to know what happens so please update soon :D
Calyptra chapter 9 . 11/4/2014
Alice thinks Bella looked sexy? Will the little human get more vamps in her bed? Oh I can totally see a tricycle
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 11 . 6/12/2014
I so look forward to reading more of this delicious story. Update soon please!

chanur chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
GeezerWench chapter 11 . 1/20/2014
Oh. Good.

Okay, Honey, I've been married almost 34 years. I'd suggest a very l-o-n-g engagement.

Congrats on your Masters.
GeezerWench chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
Certainly was a shift.

Now, the question is ... how did Alice not know Edward was for her when she and Jasper first showed up at the Cullens?
GeezerWench chapter 9 . 1/20/2014
Well, this should be interesting.
GeezerWench chapter 8 . 1/20/2014
Edward. Once and done?

What the hell is his problem? I could pretty much believe he'd feel guilty over "driving Bella" to seek relief elsewhere, but you'd think, once he had it, he'd be back for more!

Boy's a moron.

Yeah, Bella. Tell Edward to take a hike! Go get that cowboy!
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
Now, how could Edward be a "great" lover if her hadn't ever had sex before?


I want Jasper!
GeezerWench chapter 6 . 1/20/2014
Damn. Alice was WAY forgiving.

And Edward? It's all right because he'd end up married to Bella?

they seem awfully damn ... calm.
GeezerWench chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
That was pretty hot.

and then, technically, you wrote it well, too.

Oh, yes, eau de Jasper all over her!
GeezerWench chapter 4 . 1/20/2014
There's gonna be trouble. Bella pretty much told Jasper she'd be jerking off again! So to speak. She knows he can feel her emotions and such, so she's doing it to tease him.

ha ha ha ha ha


Don't write the story for reviews (even though getting reviews is great!), write it because you want to!
GeezerWench chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
Interesting conversation between Bella and Jasper.
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