Reviews for What Is Going On With Her?
chanur chapter 5 . 2/23
GeezerWench chapter 11 . 1/20
Oh. Good.

Okay, Honey, I've been married almost 34 years. I'd suggest a very l-o-n-g engagement.

Congrats on your Masters.
GeezerWench chapter 10 . 1/20
Certainly was a shift.

Now, the question is ... how did Alice not know Edward was for her when she and Jasper first showed up at the Cullens?
GeezerWench chapter 9 . 1/20
Well, this should be interesting.
GeezerWench chapter 8 . 1/20
Edward. Once and done?

What the hell is his problem? I could pretty much believe he'd feel guilty over "driving Bella" to seek relief elsewhere, but you'd think, once he had it, he'd be back for more!

Boy's a moron.

Yeah, Bella. Tell Edward to take a hike! Go get that cowboy!
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 1/20
Now, how could Edward be a "great" lover if her hadn't ever had sex before?


I want Jasper!
GeezerWench chapter 6 . 1/20
Damn. Alice was WAY forgiving.

And Edward? It's all right because he'd end up married to Bella?

they seem awfully damn ... calm.
GeezerWench chapter 5 . 1/20
That was pretty hot.

and then, technically, you wrote it well, too.

Oh, yes, eau de Jasper all over her!
GeezerWench chapter 4 . 1/20
There's gonna be trouble. Bella pretty much told Jasper she'd be jerking off again! So to speak. She knows he can feel her emotions and such, so she's doing it to tease him.

ha ha ha ha ha


Don't write the story for reviews (even though getting reviews is great!), write it because you want to!
GeezerWench chapter 3 . 1/20
Interesting conversation between Bella and Jasper.
GeezerWench chapter 2 . 1/20
Whoa. Edward's stalker perv rubbed off on Bella. Now *she's* peeping in windows.

Gotta say though, I wouldn't be able to look away.

I'd have to say ... I wouldn't think Edward would bring up the fact that Bella had a "naughty dream." I have to agree with "it just wouldn't be proper if he thought I was touching myself."

You're doing good. I {heart} Jasper!
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 1/20
Well, now. Who wouldn't be staring at Jasper?

Poor Bella. Cruel of Edward to tease her like that.
Redtrubble chapter 11 . 1/13
love the story
Jaspersmate1983 chapter 11 . 12/23/2013
Like the story look forward to more! Please write more soon!
Crystal jane chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
i would love to have Jasper in my room
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