Reviews for Eyes of a Stranger
Supernoodle chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
That was a lovely, heartfelt little fic with just the right amount of delicious whump. Perfect.

I wish they could get back to season 1 boys...

xxx
gr8read chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
Really enjoyed the Sue character. Nice job.
VooDoo Doll13 chapter 3 . 6/22/2009
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Damn it, the boys are just so stubborn! They really are their father's sons...

Look forward to reading more of your work.
RoseMariePaige chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
OMG! I read all three chapters and I absolutely loved it! I like the last paragraph you wrote for the third chapter, about how the brothers were looking at each other like stangers but how a stranger saw the truth in both.
SueJRA chapter 3 . 5/4/2009
I can't believe that I have not reviewed this story yet so let me put that straight and say in written form what I have said to you in person. You're a legend and I LOVE IT!

I've always loved how accurately you portray the Winchesters, it was ability whih drew me to your stories in the first place along with this wonderful knack you have for injecting your own brand of humour into your fiction without letting it detract from the drama. Eyes of a Stranger is another example of getting it spot on

You also the ability is to create alternate characters with a likeabilty factor that readers can relate to. It started with Grace & Nicki and now we have Sue, someone who sneakily sounds like someone I know (can't think who)

Thank you for writing this & all your other stories because at the risk of invoking one of Dean's dreaded chick flick moments, if it wasn't for your storytelling ability, I would never have found purehalo, I would never have got a chance to talk to you and therefore would never found one of my best friends. So thank you!

Now write a bloody sequel! Love ya babes Xx
Sarah chapter 3 . 4/20/2009
Woman, you have gone and done it again. It's not fair. No one person should be allowed to possess this much talent. Care to lend me some?

For a while there I was sure Sue was a ghost or maybe a figment of Dean's concussed mind. That would have been kinda cool. But being a though cockie is a must when dealing with that stubborn man. And he is still the hero, broken bones and all. I love it, all of it, twisted and glutton for HurtDean as I am. Keep 'em coming, I'll read 'em with pleasure.
MJ2901 chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
Very well written story. Great job on showing both the love and disconnect between Dean and Sam.
sergeantmicky chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
Ok, so that was a totally awesome story, with a totally awesome ending. Poor boys! I really thought you captured their unease around each other - that is so evident these days - perfectly. There's no doubt you write the brothers just right. I loved this, but I have to say I'm sorry to see it end! :) Hope to see more from you soon. :)
mlaspike chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
Such a fantastic ending! Truly heartbreaking that they have drifted so far apart. And like you said, they love each other so much yet can't figure out where to go from here!

Amazing writing as always. I can't tell you how greatful I am to see that you are writing again. I have missed you!

Looking forward to your next one! :)

ME!
Valtira chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
Great story but sad. I hope Kripke doesn't pit brother against brother. I will hunt him down.
Maz101 chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
It was good to have another POV on the boys in the form of no-nonsense Sue. Your penultimate parargraph is so sad cos that's just how it's going in S4.
KatieLB chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
argh those boys are breaking my heart! i just want to strangle them both this season I swear! Great job on this story and i love seeing the boys through her eyes and im glad she kept everything to herself... totally the way it would happen on sn LOL ttyl m
alwaysateen chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
Awesome ending!

Poor Sue, seeing the boys pains and she can't do anything about it...

I'm glad the brothers talked though...
staceycj chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
AWESOME! Even though I think that there should be more...at least one more chapter when she tells Sam what Dean said. I think that would be cool. But anyway, awesome story.
pandora jazz chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
It was a good ending, sad, but true to the show. No quick fixes for the brothers.

I'm glad that Sam at least missed Dean and smiled when Dean called his little brother Sammy.

I liked your closing lines, 'Yet she could see they still had hope, their ties as brothers the strength that she prayed would get them through. She watched as they looked at each other, a hint of recognition hidden beneath a cavern of uncertainty. Each brother staring into the eyes of a stranger, while a stranger saw the truth in both.'

Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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