|Reviews for Growing Up Finnegan|
| monkeylove123 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
you should write another chapter!
| iixne chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I'm gonna give you a good review, because this was a very good story.
You put alot of thought into this, it seems very well written and well planned out. My favourite was the ending, the twist was pretty emotional, and made me "aaww" xD lol. It seemed like a pretty sad story in a way, mostly cause it's like everyone's leaving her, but the way you write Finn's mom, hiding behind walls and stuff to prove that there's no monsters in Finn
s closet, that was very cute, and made her sound like such a cool mom xD. But you know having that kind of figure in his life kinda explainz his behaviour a lil, like when he's sneaking around when he doesn't need to. Hey, maybe that's why he's so good at avoiding hard work! Jkz jkz, haha. That was really awesome. I liked how it seemed like his mother really knew him too and noticed when his behaviour changed and stuff or when he was hiding things. A little creepy how she'z like alwayz watchin him when he doesn't no it, but whatever, haha. I guess all parents are sorta like that, ish, watching at some point or another.
Anyway I think you did a fantastic job, what really sold it was your attention to little details. It's funny cause I usually like stories with lots of talking and jokes, but this was like ... serious with almost no talkin and it was still golden xD
Great job, you're an awesome writter
keep up the great work
| Cassandra chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
CARVER APPOLOGIZES TO THE STORM HAWKS INCLUDING AERROW. CARVER KEEPS TALKING AND PIPER AND FINN AND JUNKO STORK AND RADARR CAME OUT OF ATMOSIA WEARING THEIR ARMOR WHILE AERROW STARTED SPEAKING INTO THE MICROPHONE AND THE CAMERAMAN PUTS IT IN FRONT OF AERROW'S ALARM WENT AND THE SHIP STARTED FALLING OUT OF THE SKY AND AERROW TOLD THE STORM HAWKS TO GET EVERYBODY TO SAID", YOU AND ME CARVER AND AERROW AND CARVER LAND ON THE LAUNCHING PAD WHILE AERROW GOES INTO THE ENGINE ROOM AND STOP THE SHIP FROM FALLING OUT OF THE SKY. AERROW WAS TRAPPED IN THE ENGINE ROOM WHILE HE STEERS THE WHEEL AND CRASHES THE SHIP INTO THE WASTELAND AND CRASHED IT INTO THE GROUND. AERROW PUTS HIS LASER SWORDS TOGETHER AND HIT IT AGAINST THE DOOR BUT IT DIDN'T BUDGE. AND RADARR KEEPS SCRATCHING AT THE DOOR. AERROW SAID", GO",AND THAT'S AN ORDER AND CARVER GRABBED RADARR WITH HIS HAND AND PUT HIM INTO THE SKIMMER AND FLEW OUT OF THE SHIP AND LANDED ON THE GROUND IN FRONT OF PIPER. CARVER WAS WALKING AROUND AND RADARR WAS SAD WHEN AERROW CRASHED THE SHIP INTO THE GROUND AND THE CAMERAMAN SAID", WHAT A TRAGEDY AND WAIT A MINUTE AND SEE AERROW FLY OUT OF THE SHIP IN HIS SKIMMER AND PIPER AND FINN WALKED OVER SO PIPER CAN HUG HIM.
| selenathestormhawk chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Gleep! Makes you think, doesn't it? I wonder how his life actually was...?