Ugh it's been years and "my little shipper heart" is still broken!

Another great chapter! I really hope you deviate from the books. Eric needs to keep up that fighting spirit

He better fight for it! I hope you have him do more than CH did.

I know it's been five years, but will you ever update this?

This is good, smooth writing and realistic dialogue. Of course we know the shape of the story, but Epov is well handled and convincing. I shall be glad to read more.

liked this but I truly hated that CH broke Seick up

This is my 2nd time through reading this story and I'm loving it just as much as the 1st time. I did want to point something out to you though. In this chapter you follow the book on how Debbie Pelt was disposed of as well as her car, but in your version of what Eric did you wrote that he tore up her body and buried in piece all over and that her car was also torn to pieces and scattered around a junk yard. If you ever come back to this story which I hope you do very much so. You might want to either change the chapter on how you had Eric dispose of her or adjust this one to match the way you had Eric dispose of her. Personally I like how you originally wrote it.

Another great chapter!

Short but still very well written!

Heartbreak for everyone. : (

Oh, Eric. *sigh*

So well written and so sad!

Heartbreaking conversation.

It's so much more torturous going through this part from Eric's point of view! Well done!

Poor Eric!