Reviews for Discovering Beauty
Envy Etiquette chapter 41 . 9/29/2012
I know you wrote this ages ago, but I thought this chapter (41) was so amazing! I was so excited for each line and Hermione and Narcissa's interactions were great. Seriously awesome job. (Along with the rest of the story of course.)
liljennmartin chapter 56 . 9/28/2012
This his story was AMAZING! I have to admit that I was hesitant to read a story with a Hermione-Lucius pairing, but I am quite glad I did! 'Discovering Beauty' was well-written & creative. I thoughly enjoyed it & couldn't put it down! I loved the scene with Hermione dancing dancing in Malfoy Manor to Duran Duran & Guns & Roses and the line "There was hardly a need for her to answer, there could only ever be one reply" was pure perfection! Seriously, well done!
Ink and Parchment chapter 53 . 9/25/2012
Favorite line: ""Now ... where were we?" Draco drawled, lowering his mouth onto hers immediately." Nice to see the young Malfoy getting some lovin'.
Ink and Parchment chapter 52 . 9/25/2012
Favorite line: He raised his eyebrows. "Indeed? And I assume, that like my son this coming year, you will be twenty three?" LOVE the age difference. As for what I would like from Lucius? Him, wearing sharply suited dress robes and that smirk, holding out his hand for me to take so he can lead me to his bed.
Ink and Parchment chapter 51 . 9/25/2012
Favorite line: "As his breathing slowed, he spoke, his voice so tender she hardly realised it was him.

"I love you." Perfect, perfect, perfect.
Ink and Parchment chapter 50 . 9/25/2012
Favorite line: "He spoke softly and slowly, but his voice dripped with icy malice and hatred. "Ahh, but you see, Mr Weasley ... I have fucked her so hard, so long, and so full, that when she comes, screaming my name over and over and over again, branded by pleasure to me ... all memory of your pathetic, limp prick is banished forever." He looked at Ron, completely defeated before him. He raised his eyebrows to emphasise the point and allowed his mouth a slight satisfied smirk."

And that was the comeback to all comebacks.
Ink and Parchment chapter 49 . 9/25/2012
Oh dear, indeed. Favorite line: "Her head fell back and a groan escaped her. "Lucius ... not here ... people may see ..."

"Does it matter?" He continued to torment her."

Wicked, that man.
Ink and Parchment chapter 48 . 9/25/2012
Favorite line: "Just then in the mirror she noticed a dark shape behind her. She gasped in shock, but soon realised it was Lucius, standing in the doorway. He said nothing, but crossed to her, standing behind, looking over her shoulder at her reflection." Just his presence is enough. Wow.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
crazy about this fanfic and will forever be as it is well written and god i love this paring. It will always remain as one of my favorite Lucuis and Hermione fanfics and is it okay to say, maybe a little too much smut ;)
Ink and Parchment chapter 47 . 9/20/2012
Favorite bit: The entire conversation with Trimblewort.
Ink and Parchment chapter 46 . 9/20/2012
Favorite bit: "He was staring at his father in bewilderment, but then he turned to look at Hermione. She thought she detected, for the first time ever, a change behind his cold eyes." I'm enjoying Draco's contribution to this story.
Ink and Parchment chapter 43 . 9/20/2012
My favorite line: "I had no idea your father was so amazing." Neither did I, thanks to this story. :P
Ink and Parchment chapter 42 . 9/20/2012
Favorite bit: "Yes ...yes's only you ...I'll fuck you so hard I'll only fit you ...gods ... Hermione ... don't ever doubt ... only you ... only you ..." O_O I...think I may have grew faint at that. Geez.
Ink and Parchment chapter 41 . 9/20/2012
Favorite line: ""And please put your cigarette out. I should have said before. We don't like smoking in the house." Yeah, take that Narcissa! It's her home now!
Ink and Parchment chapter 40 . 9/20/2012
Favorite line: ""So ... was Lucius' son in your year, 'Mione? Was he a friend of yours?" They were digging, clearly intrigued by the age difference." I've always been a fan of age gap relationships. I myself am married to a man 6 years older than I am.
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