|Reviews for Emailed Love|
| StarHobbit chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
To be honest i found this story cute but it was quite boring but you are quite a good writer and since this was your first story i'll let you off... C U SOON
| maranjaagumon chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Cool story bit short still cool english not home language as see sory.
| SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Prior to reading this, I took a look at your profile
First off- your punctuation isn't bad, silly. Especially for a young writer. The language you use, if basic, is good.
Also, the idea is sweet and the layout of your text isn't bad.
I think if you keep writing as you grow up, your style will improve itself on its own. But beta's are also good.
| 90MLLu chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
It went pretty quickly. I would like it to be a bit longer and a bit detailed. Other nice idea(v)
| Jaeda star chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
hey there! So you're new? Aww! Don't worry, i'll be nice! :) You've got potential to write great stories and with a beta reader you'll go far! I'll beta read for you if you'd like! (i admit, that was shameless advertising...)Just PM me and let me know... Anyway, the idea for this was kinda sweet! Don't give up and write plenty more stories, Ok?
| PrincessJaded chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Might I suggest a beta. There was a lot of punctuation errors and some spelling mistakes.
Cute concept though.
| ReimeiOokami chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
very good enjoyed every second of it please write more but sorry i have no more suggestions.