|Reviews for The Ordeal of Fate|
| PurpleCat5817 chapter 11 . 4/7
You are an amazing writer! What really gets me is your plot twists and your descriptive writing on the character's actions and thoughts! I read the first story and I loved it even more! Please continue writing although the last time you updated was like 7 years ago...but still! Please! Finish this sequel!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/2/2015
More more ! And raven not pregnant yet that's alot of sex ! Love love LOVEEEEEE it
| Amissum chapter 11 . 12/3/2014
Hey, just wanted to say I love this story and the first one too! I know it's been around 5 years since it was updated, but is there any chance you might? I absolutely love this story and even if you don't want to update maybe pm me with the rest? This is one of the best I've read on here and I just don't want it to end! Thanks :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
Finish it please and how come raven didn't get pregnant after all that unprotected sex
| xXMelonsXx chapter 11 . 12/10/2013
you haven't updated in so loooooong, and I love this story. plz update!
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
| Stitches44 chapter 11 . 6/17/2013
Loving this story so much! Please find a way to continue it! I'm dying to see what happens next!
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/11/2013
Please update this fic! It is really good.
I love the Raven/Slade pairing, and I love how you portray their relationship.
I wish I could pinpoint all my favorite parts, but of I did I would end up quoting your entire story.
It has been four years since your last update, but I haven't lost faith that this story will be completed.
I have been a big fan of yours since I first read "The Edge of Taboo".
I know you must have reasons for not updating in so long, but I do hope you find your muse/inspiration to continue this story.
| KingLoitl chapter 11 . 1/2/2013
I just read ur prequel and now this ONCE AGAIN...U ARE A GENIOUS! did i spell that right? anywho! GREAT STORY MAH DUDE/DUDE-ET :D update asap! im dying to no what happens next
| ANON chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Heya! This is the best sladen story that ever existed. PLS FINISH XXX
| discb chapter 11 . 7/25/2012
I hope you come back even though it's been 3 years, would love to see Rose fight Slade and Raven kill Lex.
| Erun1 chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
TT it's beautiful! I love it! Please continue quickly! How 'bout this. Although it is kind of hard to find anything unperfect about your chapters, I shall go back and review a certain number of chapters, depending on how long it takes :3 although, if you are lacking inspiration that's find. But please no heartbreak. Please. I love Raven being happy for once. Although Nightwing and Raven, or Wraith, should have a final showdown.
| Raecheveyc chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
omg I love this so far! I love that it's his daughter and, as you pointed out, she and Raven switched places :D ahahaha Raven(Wraith beat the sh*t outta Nightwing!) you go girl!
| kittyfiction2008 chapter 11 . 11/7/2011
i do not know if you will get this but i must review any way!
first things first i really do enjoy this story and the plot mixed with your writting style keeps me completely captavated! i really do hope that you will complete this story some day! i would really likr to see how it will end... is it wrong that the summery of this story left me with visions of raven droping a baby off for the team to take care of? i thing that would be cool... now on the same topic will preg be happening in this story? because i would really love thar! :) please exscuse any errors i am on a DS so its kinda hard to review... any who p,ease keep up the good work
| Quoththeraven1103 chapter 11 . 6/15/2011
Are you not planning on continuing with this? Whyever wouldn't you? I know I'm a little late as I've only just now finished the first part of this story and now the sequel but please if you have the time I'd love it if you'd continue! I'd love to read more!