Reviews for Behind Closed Curtains
ChocolateLover456 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Some of the words repeated there meaning and the like, like, "his dirty mouth…into his willing mouth."

You can just say his dirty and willing mouth.

Anyway thanks and keep up the good work.
hpfan1982 chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
I wanna suck u off while u read this to me
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
"I would do anything for and to your thick, eight inch rod if you would just use me as the horny, whore that your gorgeous meat has made me into," Harry pleaded for friction.

that your gorgeous meat has made me into,"

that your gorgeous meat


I found that bit a bit weird but other than that this is soooo hot I'm dripping right now and if you don't continue this I'm just gonna have to play all by myself ;)
hpdude-4life chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
So effin hot
xXxXBOTDF136XxXx chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
I lu-u-u-u-uv thiiiiis story! Pleeeeeease keep going! Update soon! :P
lil joker 1989 chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
this was a bit funny but good ]
sweetandspice chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
So hot want more. So wet. god I'm such a slut for yur story's.
FortuneGoddessOfGaia chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
This was so hot! I had to masturbate while reading it!
Mnez303 chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
ooooooohhhhh my fucking god...please please please please please please finish this? so hot...
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
Oh I loved it. I love stories that make Harry a wanton slut. I think Harry needs a certain punishment in the near future, though. Chains will work.
This chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I've got some ideas...

You should have R/H have sex in their dorm while the others boys are on Christmas hols but Remus, Sirius and Snape are present and watching. You decide whatever form Sirius is in - human/animagus. They then decide to join the boys.

Or R/H are sex whores and provide their services in the Room of Requirement. Setting has to be a bathroom stall thing where R/H fucks the other with one of them getting fucked through the stall door and the other giving a blowjob through another hole in the stall door/wall. Excluding 1-3rd years, all boys know about it including the male teachers - who may join.

Or R/H are sex slaves to Snape and Lucius.

As for 'The Horny Multi..." Can Ron please be the first mate? After all, they're best friends.
Ishtar205 chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
I love that one, I'l a great fan of Harry/Ron
Hidden Star chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
Just for you to know: It really is good wanking material. :D
james32177 chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
plz write more mpreg
mattcun chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
plz write more ch 3
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