Well this was great nice lemon also still meddling Kakashi and Yamato trying to get closer to Naruto to find out all he knows but of course adding Yamato into the mix is troublesome

Well that was interesting for a moment i thought that Sasori had killed Sakura and that would have sucked but he didn't and Naruto killed him so Naruto 1 Akatsuki 0 of course Deidara isn't dead a shame really

Well this was cool I'll probably have to start over though as I forgot what happened before sux starting a story then forgetting about it

i liked it. Thank you for the read.

this story was one of the best I have ever read on fanfiction. net

A nodachi is a long sword, a kodachi is a short sword.

a istória é boa.

Nice story, really enjoyed it.

Tus historias están en el promedio, en base a como las narras. Las premisas en sí son, "grandes" como tú las dices, sin embargo, te quedas leyendo con la esperanza de ver eso que prometes que es y lo único que pasa es que te desepcionas. Tus "fsnfics" son frescasos, me da igual que pienses de ello. Seré franco, no encuentro absolutamente nada que se salve de esto. La historia avanza pero en sí, deja con la sensación de no haber echo nada. Te apegas demasiados al canon, diciendo cosas tipo (y esto me molesta) un pj contemple un problema, hable y piense como nunca antes lo hizo en el canon, sin ninguna razón que contradiga su personalidad del canon. Aparte, en base al entrenamiento. Lo hiciste ver muy grande, siento decirte que al final es una mierda. Dijiste centrarse en ninjutsu, del cual apenas usa un quinto del arsenal en la batalla, con su suerte, Siendo esto, esquivados o desviados en el mejor de los casos. Su fuerza, lo que viene siendo el taijutsu, es basura. Recuerda , grandísimo genio, en una lucha lo que más se hace es intercambiar golpes, esto no es Pokémon, entiendes? Si se centra tan poco en ese tema, va ser que lo matan antes de que siquiera haga una señal de mano. En base al genjutsu, no lo necesita. Tiene al kyubi para liberarlo del mismo.

Resultado, palbras grandes y al final va siendo lo mismo, cambiando el nerviosismo y el miedo, o bien descuido en las acciones de Naruto con la "tranquilidad" con repentinos ataques de suerte lanzando ninjutsu para salvarlo de peligros. Como dije, es una historia promedio, llena de errones, que cuando la acabas, lo que sientes va siendo nada. Te sientes vacío, como si no hubieras leído nada nuevo. Es un sentimiento extraño, y horrible, y eso es lo que dan tus historias.

Una desepcion de historia, sin duda, y no solo está. Lo mismo va surgiendo en cada una de las que escribiste.

Para el que les esto, suerte con eso.

I really like it!

Very good plot and I like Yugao as the romantic, partner, sensei interest!
I love all the training journey with more sense and more learning, than how to master the fox...
He could do a lot more and you dis really well

About Sasuke it is really good that the wife is Anko and not Sakura, he would have left her as he did in canon. But I can believe he will be happy and all be a good Konoha shinobi, after all the council of elders decided to kill his clan. I don't think he had forget that, and he was really jelous of Naruto during the fight to be tranquil as a good shinobi... so is good that he doesn't know. About the seal Naruto is master of... also he must renew it to someone he trust in the future, when he is old, because Sasuke could outlive him

But there are two or three loose plots, what happen in the end with Kabuto? You gave him a lot of scenes even with him turning in a giagian human snake, so what happened? He died, he will try to kill everything?

The plant guy is alive! What about him?

And finally Danzou, obviously there is the new betrayal, Jiraiya knew, and the Uchicha one, and he have all the eyes, no one will do anything about him?

just a plain naruto x yugao story is so rare besides the harem ones

thanks for finishing this great read, now on to lone wolf

The story's been interesting so far, but the not-so-small amount of typos kinda detracted the reading experience. The writing itself could also use a bit polishing. It's been years since the story was first published. No doubt your writing has improved a lot. It would be great if you could give the story a revamp.

I like the plot but it's like everyone in the story has Aspergers.

"The only thing needed for the technique was to be able to mold chakra."
That's stupid, it was forbidden for a reason. its funny how you think the gennin bunshin is
better than shadow clones.