Jiraiya is an embarrassment as a sensei.
Not teaching an Uzumaki sealing? That’s his birthright.
He has no excuse. Not only can Naruto create hundreds of shadow clones so he can learn sealing, but Jiraiya knows sealing as well.
The way you’ve set up this fic, he’s spamming shadow clones to learn.
There’s no reason Jiraiya can’t use a couple of shadow clones to train in multiple things at the same time. This fic seems to think he can only train one discipline at a time which is a huge flaw. He has shadow clones. He can do everything at once.
Even in school, they have time blocked out for different subjects. Making Naruto focus on only one subject for 6 months at a time? Ridiculous.

i loved this story.

Naruto managed to reach high chunin level taijutsu after half a year, but still trained his body and grew. After two and a half years he is still at the level of chunin, so wtf? The og Naruto was all in all special jonin after the time skip. Meaning chunin with an area he exceeded it, which was Ninjutsu. Now he trained hard for 3 years and it amounts to the same level. Wasnt it supposed to be stronger then canon Naruto. I mean new jutsu are cool and all, but if his overall skill improvement is more advanced in knowlege, then it seems rather underwhelming. Jiraya wanted him to reach jonin level overall, which while constantly surprising and exceeding his expectations, he didnt seem to succed. Its weird to be honest.

Katon
-BECAUSE FIRE

This storeys so stupid you got naruto jonin level but he's chunin makes no sense so when he's get 9 tails mode he'll be high chunin low jonin rank . Like what I'm losing brain cells here

Amazing story, amazing character development and beautiful relationship growth without the whole girlfriend being threathened thing. Amazing.

Minato is far from the strongest shinobi in existence there are opponents who could kill him the third Hokage in his prime, Hashirama and maybe even Tobirama, Madara prime, and others

an okay story

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2022

I really like how this story ended. This definitely one of the best Naruto stories I've read but uhh... what about Zetsu? As long as he lives, The Infinite Tsukuyomi Plan is not over. It feels like this story hasn't actually ended yet because Zetsu still lives.

I don't think it's smart to not have Naruto learn Senjutsu in my opinion. Comparing Senjutsu and Kyuubi's chakra isn't about which is stronger since both have different uses. Senjutsu proves to be better for enhanced senses and better reflexes as evident by the fact that Naruto used it against the Sandaime Raikage. Senjutsu also allowed Naruto to sense invisible clones. Even if those aren't enough reason, Naruto can't keep up Kyuubi Chakra Mode forever so having something else would be beneficial. Also, combing both Kyuubi's chakra and Senjutsu seem kinda OP.

Read so many Gaara rescues Im tempted to skip this

yeahh sure protect the Village you fucking pussy of a beta bitch

will he learn sage mode

Naruto without this traits isn't Naruto for meOrange, Ramen, Loudmouth, Humourous, Knucklehead,
Reckless, Kage Bunshin, Rasengan. At least put 4 of them and Naruto will be Naruto not some OC named Naruto.

Are you sure you're a real Naruto fan Naruto wore orange he was able to vandalize the whole the Hokage monument and no one knew he was up there why he will orange laughing hysterically and he was able to outrun those who chase after him soon afterwards I'm not sure we are a real new boyfriend you're still has potential for gets a little older you guys at the trash his Orange jumpsuit I just want to point out the inconsistency but outside of that it's pretty decent