Reviews for Regret |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story and good ending. |
![]() ![]() if you don't do earth then do fire bc wind fuels fire and why not a katana bro why a bo staff |
![]() ![]() I am not reading this fic any further because of fucking sakura... Thanks dear author, you just ruined this nice fic for me...YOU SUCK |
![]() ![]() ![]() Itachi's manipulation of Sasuke was masterfully done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only issue with forgoing sage mode is that you lose the rasenshuriken. It was the nature chakra that allowed him to stabilize it so that it could be thrown. And, let's be real, he needs a jutsu that hits that hard. He can't rely on the bijudama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure that last bit was believable. I mean, hasn't Tobi just recently killed Orochimaru? How did he not only find out where Sasuke was, but also catch up to him. It doesn't make sense. The sharingan doesn't let him simply warp all over the place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. My only complaint is that too much is being told or explained, not enough just happening. Naruto's discussion with Sakura, for instance, shouldn't have been glazed over and summarized. |
![]() ![]() Why is he so weak? Trains with shadow clones for 3 years but only has chunin taijutsu. You merged him so much, sasuke would make easy work of him right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Water. Wind beats lightning, water beats fire. |
![]() ![]() I'll just pretend that Naruto didn't read about a version of the Shadow Clone Jutsu in a random book from the library when the original Jutsu its based off of was in the FORBIDDEN SCROLL locked in the hokage's office. Smh |
![]() ![]() Such a bloody awesome story, I'm glad I decided to read it again, it's even better this time! |
![]() ![]() A really well choreographed fight, it's hard not to over-elaborate but you did great! (Eight-o pun) ;-) |
![]() ![]() You don't have to worry about Naruto being too strong, S-rank vs. S-rank can still be exciting! Just look at the UFC, only fights between equals are fun. Sure, one-handed curb stomping can be entertaining but seeing two human beasts go at each other is bloody awesome! Sure it's fun to cheer the underdog but watching two Alphas go at it is even more fun! I just wish that you and your Betas could catch your spelling mistakes because my inner grammar-nazi tends to foam at the mouth at times with your writings. |
![]() ![]() My vote goes to 4 - Kamiton (God-mode muthafucka) ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() so like if u cant incorporate dialogue, then just separate it |