You Should’ve Got A Better Beta Reader There Are Numerous Spelling ErrorsEven More So Grammatically Using Wrong The Word For A Sentence When A Different Word Would’ve Helped It Flow Better It’s A Good Story But There Alarming Number Of Errors That Should’ve Been Corrected Especially Since You Had A Beta

I have mentioned this to a few writers but hyoton like any sub element is able to be used by any shinobi as long as they know the hand signs, how to mold the chakra and have the materials nearby to manipulate. The bloodline itself only comes into the equation when they need to create the sub element itself(aka when there is no ice or snow nearby) or for certain advanced jutsu like Hakus demon ice mirrors

Good Chapter!

The true problem of the nine tails chakra that it's filled with hatred... which could easily be fixed if the night tales was not hateful and Trust Naruto

Keep In mimd Killer Bee Ws Kicking Sasuke ass.

What's up with the Jonin level Sasuke and Naruto? Sasuke was able to defeat Deidara in Canon which makes Sasuke S Rank and Sasuke defeated Sasori in this fic which would also make him S rank. You are wanking the Jonin Rank. Kakashi is a High Jonin but is weaker then both Naruto and Sasuke in this story.

Don’t know why you won’t let him use senjutsu since he needed that in order to defeat obits as the ten tail host

Good story tho

I find it ironic that you won’t make naruto into a supergod but in the manga during the war when naruto and sasuke die, it is revealed that both of them are indeed gods via reincarnation of ashura and indra and are both granted sage of six paths powers making them god like shinobi however I take into account that this fanfic ends before that moment so it sick’s that you won’t be able to incorporate that moment in this fan fic

Katon

10/10

Great job

Sooo as experienced shinobi, a profession that requires immense cunning, kakashi didn't think the make sure the enemy that used the very visible very easy to see suicide technique was dead?