|Reviews for Forever And a Day|
| Eri 'n' Ali chapter 10 . 6/27/2009
Aww, this is so gd, nd being in a car with Emmett would not be fun at all.
Gd luck in ur GCSE's, I'm starting mine in September.
| pilika0023 chapter 9 . 5/7/2009
Update soon, I can't wait!
| Emmy1512 chapter 9 . 5/7/2009
LOL! I loved your AN. I'm sorry my computer died the other nigth when I tried to review, so I hope this works. I loved this chapter. It was really funny, and interesting. I loved Jasper's thoughts... It showed just how much he doesn't want to hurt her. I'll be sad to see what goes wrong (as foreshadowed in the first chapter), but I'm hoping for a happy ever after :P
Your spelling and grammar is getting a lot better, and much easier for me to beta. Well done!
Love ya bb!
| Little-Beaut-20 chapter 9 . 5/4/2009
hey baby sis dont worry bout smutty its fun reading ur stuff lol
y did it have to end thre i was really enjying it talk about cliff-hangers yuve got me wanting more lol :)
| Lolly chapter 8 . 4/9/2009
I am lolly! lmao. Sorry i had to put that. I am finally reviewing its amazing :). I love this story it is soo sweet, you know how to get someone hooked on so they want to read more. Even if it is a little smutty however, you spell it. Ah well, keep writing girl its going to get you somewhere 1 day x
| Emmy1512 chapter 8 . 4/5/2009
I beta'd it :D
God I feel accomplished. It was like a wham bam, DONE! heheh.
Just a quick review to say I loved this chapter. I have to go do other beta'ing now. :p
first of all, favourite line:
“Eddie’s got blue balls”
Another glance and we both burst into in an uncontrollable fit of giggles.
“Poor ikle Eddie” Alice choked out
FUCKING LAUGHED MY FUCKING ARSE OFF AT THAT!
Seriously. My lappy nearly became victim to projectile coke.
love emmy xx
| Pink Mouse Dudette chapter 7 . 4/1/2009
I like this
| kelmo chapter 7 . 4/1/2009
this story makes my heart melt.
keep it up : )
| Carin chapter 7 . 4/1/2009
I liked these two chapters. Maybe they are too short though! / but I'm loving it-
| Emmy1512 chapter 7 . 4/1/2009
Another fantastic chapter bbz. And zomg thank you for the mention in your AN. Omg people arent reviewing? shall i kill them for you?
This is so sweet, the whole story is. I think I'm going to cry when we get to the bit they break up.
I can't wait to beta another chapter.
fav line for this chapter was:
“Don’t worry, he will be…”
What? Was my first thought.
Hell yes! Was my second.
Ok, for now, Emmy out
| Carla chapter 6 . 3/30/2009
That was sweet. I can understand him being worried about that. I lovevved the lemons on the previous chappy!
| Emmy1512 chapter 6 . 3/30/2009
Aw THANK YOU FOR MENTIONING ME :D I am never going to get tired of seeing my penname up there and being, all "oh wait...hang on... HEY THAT'S ME!"
This was such a fucking sweet arse chapter. I seriously felt like my heart was going to explode.
Lol. I think I went overboard with my use of semi-colon's, but I finally get them! And they're an excellent replacement for commas.
And it was 6 words btw, when I started beta'ing, and I was like, oh yaya! I get to beta devil chapter :D LOL
But then I made it longer by like 3 words, and it wasn't 6 anymore. :'(
I looked down to our interlocked hands and knew instantly that I would never let go. I will carve that annoying little voice out with a butcher’s knife if I have to.
Nothing was going to break us apart, ever.
I loved that line. It was perfect imagery. And then ending it with that line. Made me want more, and now.
I can't freaking wait til you send me the next chapter to beta :D
Love Emmy xx
PS sorry for the rambling review :p
| wendy chapter 5 . 3/24/2009
hmm, it happened a bit too fast.
but, all in all, a good chapter ;)
| rawr chapter 5 . 3/23/2009
ttehee jaspers more sensual than i thought lol
| La chapter 5 . 3/23/2009
I really like this fic! Alice and Jazz are hot. I am worried and anxious to know what happened though and for you to go to today.