|Reviews for Through the Gates|
| pokygirl2001 chapter 48 . 3/6
You know what that was pretty cute.
| MadEclair chapter 48 . 4/12/2015
This story was beautifully written, and one of my absolute favorite fanfictions of all time! Well done! I enjoyed every second of it. The plot developed at a steady and satisfying pace, characters developed realistically and were engaging, and the relationships between everyone blossomed perfectly at exactly the right time! Nothing felt rushed or forced. I just have to say, I'll be rereading this fanfiction again and again! Excellent job! The action scenes were riveting and I couldn't stop reading! You have a talent for story telling! The beginning of each chapter being a story teller and children added a perfect touch to the fantasy aspect and made it seem like an enchanted tale, with just enough hints that you could tell who was telling the story. Thank you so much for writing this! It really made me happy.
I hope you never stop writing.
(My penname on this site is MadEclair, I just didn't take the time to sign in, I was too eager to review.)
| Tuimaalda chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Um. You know Rosacaea is a skin disease, yes?
| M4ge-Of-Light chapter 19 . 3/10/2014
OI WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE! DONT BE A BUTT AND SWEAR SO BAD TO BE DROPPING AN F-BOMB WHO THE FREAK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!? WARN US READERS NEXT TIME AND WHEN YOU USE AN F-BOMB ITS USED IN M RATED STORIES YOU ARE SO STUPID MUGGLE!
| M4ge-Of-Light chapter 7 . 3/10/2014
RAPHAEL IS SO FREAKING HOT!
| Anonn3 chapter 7 . 3/6/2014
When you described Raphael I melted... Into a giant puddle...and all I could think was HOT! Hehehe... :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/21/2013
I tried hard not to laugh out loud when Donatello, the cursed turtle with the invisible servants, started to tell Mikey that magic wasn't real...
| Otakugirly chapter 7 . 10/20/2013
Mikey' the most handsome in my opinion with Raphael at a close second Donny and Leo tied for third
| CrystalBud chapter 35 . 3/20/2013
best story ever XP
| CrystalBud chapter 46 . 3/20/2013
so awesome! ;) I would have liked a little about the actualy wedding though :(
| CrystalBud chapter 21 . 3/20/2013
Love it :)
| CrystalBud chapter 13 . 3/6/2013
oh, poor dear, but this is just getting better and better.
| CrystalBud chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
That was great, I am in love with this story. I just adore it so much. And that end bit was just so cute!
| CrystalBud chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
| Vela513 chapter 48 . 1/15/2013
I smiled and giggled the whole time reading this. Then I cried. But, I smiled the rest of the way, so, it's all good! Loved it! It was such a nice fairytale! I loved the descriptions a lot.
I really really loved reading about the parents in the first chapters: Leo's parents were perfect. Raph's parents were super super perfect! I think though, that Don's mom would've been a super healer, learning new cures and his Dad an inventor making little curious clockwork gizmos to woo his wife with, but: that was just me. I really liked Mikey's parents too.
The blatant magic everywhere with the constant "Nah! Magic ain't real!" refrain was jarring though. You'd mentioned 'enchanted' Christmas ornaments that glowed and later they all were disbelieving curses cause magic wasn't real.
All of your OC's were charming and real people! I couldn't put this down till 4 in the morning reading it the whole way thru! Loved it! :D