Please ignore my last review wrong fic

I would have expected Hermione to fight back against the bullies instead of just letting them drown her. Where’s her bravery?

I'm pretty sure I've read this before, a little wordy but good writing. Hopefully, the next chapter the terror will start to ease. I'm with Bella, feeling pretty bad for the vampire in the basement.

Just finished this for the first time. Such a great story! I don't usually do this but I am going to read it again immediately and savor the experience for a second time. I just loved the trembling, vulnerability of Bella's vampire. I hope you are still out there writing!

finally finished this and i’m just irritated by the fact that you think humans could over power vampires lol. it just makes the whole fic so unrealistic. also fire wouldn’t kill a vampire — it’s only if their head has been ripped off that it would kill them. multiple times there are comments of them having a hard time breathing in the smoke? what? they don’t need to breathe lmfao. other than that it was a good plot line — just major plot holes that make zero sense.

It was so beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us

Hi there,
I just wanted to let you know how much I loved and enjoyed this story!
Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Greetings from Germany,
leinchen

I just reread this…and it was as gripping and entrancing as the first time. So, so glad you shared it with us!

amazing story good work you put there

Bella is too stupid to be alive. This is incredible.

I've just had the pleasure of rereading this wonderful story yet again. I absolutely love it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

I’ve come back and reread this story a million times. And every time, it still makes me excited. Thank you for sharing this with us all

The only thing that hurts here is that Charlie deserves better. He knew something dangerous was going on. Really well written story.

charlie

OMG, how I loved this story! I didn't realize that this took you 3 years, and that it is your only FF! I hope you are still writing somewhere, because this was an amazing tale! Well written, with so many plot twists. I'm glad Edward got his HEA... he deserved it, after the cruelty, torture and living the way he had to for so many years. Bella certainly stood up and fought for him and his freedom. Thank you for sharing this!