Reviews for The Vampire in the Basement
Guest chapter 32 . 12/30/2013
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 32 . 12/1/2013
I loved this story! And thank you for extracting bella from Forks. I think I went off in an earlier review about how much it bothered me that Bella is allowed to maintain her lifestyle post transformation. Your ending is much more in tune with how I believe breaking dawn should have ended. Also, no werewolves? Praise Jesus! One question, did bella ever find out that Edward did in essence change her? I thought it would be revealed when they looked through the thumb drive but it wasn't disclosed. Can't wait to see what else you have written.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I am such a huge fan of this story. I have read it atleast 3 times its so good.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
What's Emmett's problem? He nor Rose have lifted a finger to help the family in this situation. The 1 task they had, watch him so jasper can decompress, they screwed up but Emmett feels dandy about making smart ass comments to and about bella? Bella doesn't seem to mince words with Alice or Carlisle. I really wanted her to say f-you. Same with "Dad"...didn't bother seeing Bella for years, she moves in to give mother of the year a break and now he "misses" her&is mr overprotective? She probably has laundry or a bathroom to clean. Sorry for the tangent but it super bugs me. When bellas turned, she should feel zero obligation to either of them.
Seekingbecca chapter 32 . 11/19/2013
hippogriff-tamer chapter 32 . 11/19/2013
Wow what a great story! I enjoyed reading this and my heart went out to Edward and all he went through poor guy but in the end he found happiness with Bella :-)
SweetlyDemonic chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
You scared my family to death. I was laughing so hard when I read your Buffy comment that my family thought I was choking to death.
serena shine chapter 15 . 11/8/2013
serena shine chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Is edward newborn?
RPattzOwnsMe chapter 32 . 10/15/2013
Great story with a twist. I adore this Edward and just wanted to hug him the whole story. I haven't read a vamp fic in quite some time, glad i finally read yours. Thanks for sharing.
jus2read chapter 32 . 10/10/2013
Aawww! Ive wanted to read this for agesss but something came up so i couldnt but wow so glad i finally did :) loved it!
Fluttershy101 chapter 23 . 9/29/2013
Change Bella period…
Tornoa chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
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Fluttershy101 chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Yo! Dis sound GOOD! I didn't even read the chapter yet nd I love it already! Damn
sammieanne chapter 20 . 9/15/2013
I just don't like Edward being so weak and closed off. I can't get a read on him so that I can give him a face, seems that this story is going around in circles, you know I believe this is a story that should be read from the end to the beginning. I think I will try the remainder of this story this way...
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